All The Way

Add your poems, essays and short stories here. Please do not post work by other writers.

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All The Way

Postby jonrey10 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:10 pm

i love you...
but you don't love me...
i care for you...
i hope you care for me too...
everytime i see you...
my feeling goes up & down...
i don't know...
do you care...?
i only care for you...
i just love you...
but what about you...?
i'll be here...
patiently waiting...
for your feelings...
to get developed...
even though...
we agreed...
that i will stop...
this ridicule...
i'll still love you...
i'll still care...
no matter what...
i'll still wait...
until you're mine...
all the way...

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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:46 pm

IT'S FICTION
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Postby jonrey10 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:28 pm

no, that's how i feel towards her... :oops:
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:18 pm

i don't think so...
actions speak louder than words kid
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Postby jonrey10 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:47 pm

IT'S TRUE! I'M NOT INVENTING THINGS. YOU ONLY KNEW THAT I'M NOT CAPABLE OF COMPOSING THOSE KINDS OF POEMS. BUT I WAS JUST INSPIRED TONIGHT, THAT'S WHY I CAME UP WITH WHAT I FEEL RIGHT NOW ABOUT HER & POSTED THAT DAMN POEM!
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:53 pm

you don't have to shout...
my opinion is still my opinion ok...
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Postby charlotte » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:56 pm

jonrey10, may be if taht's how you really feel for that girl, then you have to prove yourself worthy for her.
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:58 pm

you got my point damn right...
i'm outa here then...
if you're right, you're right...
if i'm right...i AM right.
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Postby charlotte » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:00 pm

don't be mad my friend. the one i gave you is one good suggestion. i kow you can do it.
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Postby Lilian » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:33 pm

nice one....

true feeling exist once in a life time...

jorney go for it...
English is my second language

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Postby pooh_bear » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:28 pm

poems are poems, they can be interpreted in a different manner or different ways. as long as the author or the poet knows what's the true meaning of his work then it's okay. readers will always interpret differently, they will always give their own ideas towards it. :wink:

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Postby jonrey10 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:36 pm

pooh_bear wrote:poems are poems, they can be interpreted in a different manner or different ways. as long as the author or the poet knows what's the true meaning of his work then it's okay. readers will always interpret differently, they will always give their own ideas towards it. :wink:


I understand, thank you. :D
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