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All The Way
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:10 pm
by jonrey10
i love you...
but you don't love me...
i care for you...
i hope you care for me too...
everytime i see you...
my feeling goes up & down...
i don't know...
do you care...?
i only care for you...
i just love you...
but what about you...?
i'll be here...
patiently waiting...
for your feelings...
to get developed...
even though...
we agreed...
that i will stop...
this ridicule...
i'll still love you...
i'll still care...
no matter what...
i'll still wait...
until you're mine...
all the way...
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:46 pm
by pinas
IT'S FICTION
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:28 pm
by jonrey10
no, that's how i feel towards her...
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:18 pm
by pinas
i don't think so...
actions speak louder than words kid
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:47 pm
by jonrey10
IT'S TRUE! I'M NOT INVENTING THINGS. YOU ONLY KNEW THAT I'M NOT CAPABLE OF COMPOSING THOSE KINDS OF POEMS. BUT I WAS JUST INSPIRED TONIGHT, THAT'S WHY I CAME UP WITH WHAT I FEEL RIGHT NOW ABOUT HER & POSTED THAT DAMN POEM!
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:53 pm
by pinas
you don't have to shout...
my opinion is still my opinion ok...
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:56 pm
by charlotte
jonrey10, may be if taht's how you really feel for that girl, then you have to prove yourself worthy for her.
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:58 pm
by pinas
you got my point damn right...
i'm outa here then...
if you're right, you're right...
if i'm right...i AM right.
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:00 pm
by charlotte
don't be mad my friend. the one i gave you is one good suggestion. i kow you can do it.
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:33 pm
by Lilian
nice one....
true feeling exist once in a life time...
jorney go for it...
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:28 pm
by pooh_bear
poems are poems, they can be interpreted in a different manner or different ways. as long as the author or the poet knows what's the true meaning of his work then it's okay. readers will always interpret differently, they will always give their own ideas towards it.
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:36 pm
by jonrey10
pooh_bear wrote:poems are poems, they can be interpreted in a different manner or different ways. as long as the author or the poet knows what's the true meaning of his work then it's okay. readers will always interpret differently, they will always give their own ideas towards it.
I understand, thank you. :D
