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[b]Farewell.....[/b]

Postby francine » Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:46 pm

Though the summer had lots of fun
In the rain and out in the sun
I really got to know you well
From the beginning I could hardly tell
You are indeed very special to me
I don't have to say 'cause dearly you can see
Now we've come to this moment that we should part
But we'll still be together in each other's heart
I know it's hard to say goodbye
The words turn to tears rolling down our eyes
So right now special friend, i wish you well
And sadly bid you, my fond FAREWELL.....

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Postby pooh_bear » Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:56 pm

i'm gonna cry now francine :cry:
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Postby pooh_bear » Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:57 pm

c'mon francine posts some more. i love your poems! :P
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:58 pm

pooh_bear wrote:i'm gonna cry now francine :cry:


now, don't be... hush..... it's a sad thing i don't have a happy poem with me... :? :P
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 16, 2004 3:03 pm

pooh_bear wrote:c'mon francine posts some more. i love your poems! :P


but they're all sad.... :?
not everyone likes sad poems....
tomorrow may be......
'coz i got only few here.... :roll:
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Postby pooh_bear » Thu Sep 16, 2004 3:24 pm

yea, me too all my poems are sad coz i'm usually inspired when i'm sad. i'm still looking for my poems. i forgot where i place it. :cry:
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Re: [b]Farewell.....[/b]

Postby charlotte » Thu Sep 16, 2004 3:29 pm

francine wrote:Though the summer had lots of fun
In the rain and out in the sun
I really got to know you well
From the beginning I could hardly tell
You are indeed very special to me
I don't have to say 'cause dearly you can see
Now we've come to this moment that we should part
But we'll still be together in each other's heart
I know it's hard to say goodbye
The words turn to tears rolling down our eyes
So right now special friend, i wish you well
And sadly bid you, my fond FAREWELL.....

-- :( --



this is a good one but not a happy one. i was just wondering, did you made this? you're good. i want to see more of your poems. pleeease
F r E n Z Y F r I e N d
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 16, 2004 3:39 pm

poems of love, poems about a relationship is really sad,
but it's the reality.
nice poem Francine Mancine... all the way
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c",) I'm here... all the way c",)
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:20 pm

yes thanks.... glad you like it... it's not really a deep or serious relationship... it's like just being infatuated or having a puppy love with a boy.... too bad it's just a summer vacation.
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:27 pm

good thing you had a puppy love with a "boy"
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c",) I'm here... all the way c",)
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Postby pinas » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:28 pm

so what are you trying to imply then huh??
hmph
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:29 pm

jonrey10 wrote:good thing you had a puppy love with a "boy"


of course! and who would you want me to have a puppy love with? actually, we didn't really cry... hehehe... just felt like cryin'. y'know.... :wink:
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:33 pm

pinas wrote:so what are you trying to imply then huh??
hmph


about what? u talkin to me?
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Postby pinas » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:48 pm

jonrey
dalagang pilipina - a cool chick that is
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:58 pm

pinas wrote:jonrey


oh! ok. soweee..... :P
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