You Could Never Be Mine...

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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:05 pm

Thank you, Ms. RedRose! :wink:
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:18 pm

RedRose wrote:jonrey, it is a nice essay:-) very poetic. I like it


go ask him who did he write it for.... yihiiiii again...... so many yihiiiiiisss for jonrey..... :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:27 pm

She could never be mine.... :( :cry:
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Postby Lilian » Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:05 pm

RedRose wrote:jonrey, it is a nice essay:-) very poetic. I like it


oh its an eassy.. :shock: i thought its a poem..
English is my second language

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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:21 pm

it could be both an essay & poem because it came from my heart & mind.... :D
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Postby Lilian » Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:26 pm

jonrey10 wrote:it could be both an essay & poem because it came from my heart & mind.... :D


then what do u call if it doesnt come from heart and mind..
English is my second language

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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 7:34 pm

A slip of the tounge...?
Well I really don't know... :roll:
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