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Postby pinas » Sat Sep 25, 2004 6:56 pm

Peter and Tina are sitting in the park doing
nothing, but just gazing into the sky, while all
their friends are having fun with their beloved
half.

Tina: I'm so bored. Just wish I have a boyfriend
now to spend time with.

Peter: I guess we're the only leftovers. We're
the only person who isn't with a date now. (both
sigh in silence for a while)

Tina: I think I have a good idea. Lets play a
game.

Peter: Eh? What game?

Tina: Eem... It's quite simple. You be my boyfriend
for 100 days and I'll be your girlfriend for 100
days. what do you think?

Peter: Oookay... Anyway I don't have any plan for
the next few months.

Tina: You sound like you aren't looking forward
to it at all. Cheer up. Today will be our first
day and our first date. Where should we go?

Peter: What about a movie? I heard that there is
a really great movie in theater now.

Tina: Seems like I don't have any better idea
than this. Lets move. (went to watch their
movies and sent each other home)

Day 2:
Peter and Tina went to a concert together, and
Peter bought Tina a keychain with a star.

Day 3:
They went shopping together for a friend's
birthday present. Share an ice-cream together
and hugged each other for the first time.

Day 7:
Peter drove Tina up onto a mountain and they
watch the sunset together. When the night came
and the moon glowed, they said sat on the grass
gazing at the stars together. A meteor passed
by. Tina mumbled something.

Day 25:
Spend time at a themepark and got onto
rollercoasters, and ate hotdogs and cotton
candy. Peter and Tina got in the haunted house
and Tina grabbed someone's hand instead of
Peter's hand by accident. They laughed together
for a while.

Day 67:
They drove pass a circus and decided to get in
to watch the show. The midget asked Tina to play
a part as his assistant in the magic show. Went
around to see other entertainments around after
the show. Came to a fortune teller and she just
said "Treasure every moment from now on" and a
tear rolled down the fortune teller's cheek.

Day 84:
Tina suggested that they go to the beach. The
beach wasn't so crowded that day. They have
their first kiss with each other just as the sun
is setting.

Day 99:
They decided to have a simple day and is deciding
to have a walk around the city. They sits down
onto a bench.

1:23 pm
Tina: I'm thirsty. Lets rest for a while first.

Peter: Wait here while I go buy some drinks.
What would you like?

Tina: Eem... Apple juice will be just fine.

1:43 pm
Tina waiting for about 20 minutes and Peter
havent return. Then someone walked up to her.

Stranger: Is your name Tina?

Tina: Yes, and may I help you?

Stranger: Just now down there on the street a
drunk driver has crashed into a guy. I think its
your friend.

Tina ran over to the spot with the stranger and
sees Peter lying on the floor with blood over
his face and her apple juice still in his hands.
The ambulance came and she went to the hospital
with Peter.

Tina sat outside the emergency room for five and
a half hours. The doctor came out, and he sigh.

11:51 pm
Doctor: I'm sorry, but we did the best we could.
He is still breathing now but God would take him
away from us very soon. We found this letter
inside his pocket.

The doctor hands over the letter to Tina and she
goes into the room to see Peter. He look weak
but peaceful. Tina read the letter and then she
burst into tears. Here is what the letter said:

"Tina, our 100 days is almost over. I had fun
with you during all these days. Although you may
be greedy sometimes and less thoughtful, but these
all brought happiness into my life. I have realize
that you are a really cute girl and blamed myself
for never taken the time to knowing that. I have
nothing much to ask for, but I just wish that we
can extend the day. I want to be your boyfriend
forever and wish that you can be beside me all
the time. Tina, I love you."

11:58
Tina: (sobbing) Peter. Did you know what was the
wish I made on the night there was a meteor. I
asked God to let us last forever. We were
suppose to last 100 days so Peter! You can't
leave me! I LOVE YOU, but can you come back to
me now? I love you Peter. I LOVE YOU.

As the clock struck twelve, Peter's heart
stopped beating. It was 100 days.
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Postby Dixie » Sun Sep 26, 2004 11:23 am

OMG, how beautiful and sad at the same time :cry: That means we must treasure what we already have, doesn't it?

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Postby pinas » Sun Sep 26, 2004 6:39 pm

Dixie wrote:OMG, how beautiful and sad at the same <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=time&v=56">time</a> :cry: That means we must treasure what we already have, doesn't it?


yeah..and one more thing that i think this story tells about is that we should tell people how we feel now..not tomorrow...not the day after tomorrow...
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Postby mandy » Sun Sep 26, 2004 6:48 pm

this story is so touching.... :cry: :cry: :cry:
thank u pinas.
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."

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Postby pinas » Sun Sep 26, 2004 7:07 pm

mandy wrote:this story is so touching.... :cry: :cry: :cry:
thank u pinas.


you're welcome mandy...
thank you, too!!!
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Postby Dixie » Fri Oct 08, 2004 1:28 pm

Ouch! I think, if I was Tina, I would get really mad!! There are other ways of telling someone you love them, but scaring her like that...?

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Postby RedRose » Fri Oct 08, 2004 1:30 pm

:cry: I just don't want to Peter to die... and I just want the love story to get perfect :cry: :cry: :cry:

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Postby francine » Fri Oct 08, 2004 1:55 pm

for a moment i thought i was going to cry while reading the story of pinas but then, my mood switched. you silly rose! :lol:

i like your ending. hehe.... :wink: it really made me laugh.
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Postby RedRose » Fri Oct 08, 2004 2:02 pm

thanks francine! I am an optimist. sometimes my dad thinks that my optimism is baseless and blind though :o :P

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Postby francine » Fri Oct 08, 2004 3:28 pm

RedRose wrote:thanks francine! I am an optimist. sometimes my dad thinks that my optimism is baseless and blind though :o :P


huh?!?! why should he say that? there's nothing wrong with being optimistic right??? :shock:
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Postby pinas » Fri Oct 08, 2004 6:00 pm

Dixie wrote:Ouch! I think, if I was Tina, I would get really mad!! There are other ways of telling someone you <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=love&v=56">love</a> them, but scaring her like that...?


me, too, dixie...
if he did that too me...well, i don't love him anymore..
no more love story for the 2 of us
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Postby Dixie » Fri Oct 08, 2004 6:51 pm

Hey Jellen! How are you?? ;)

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Postby pinas » Fri Oct 08, 2004 6:56 pm

Dixie wrote:Hey Jellen! How are you?? ;)


pretty fine, i guess..i'm at home, i'm on leave again...
how about you???
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Postby Dixie » Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:25 pm

I am good!!!

So you're not working today?

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Postby pinas » Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:38 pm

Dixie wrote:I am good!!!

So you're not working today?


i'll be back on monday...
got lotsa things to do then...
just needed to rest
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Postby Dixie » Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:43 pm

Great... I'm glad you're here anyway :D

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Postby pinas » Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:44 pm

Dixie wrote:Great... I'm glad you're here anyway :D


yeah...but someone's so jealous to pick a fight with me in the philippines forum...i don't know who she is...
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Postby francine » Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:46 pm

pinas wrote:
Dixie wrote:Great... I'm glad you're here anyway :D


yeah...but someone's so jealous to pick a fight with me in the philippines forum...i don't know who she is...


hehehe..... you miss biatch? the original biatch???? lol
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
someone misses her long lost friend here.... hmmmm... :D
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Postby Dixie » Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:47 pm

Really, Jellen? I'm coming over! :D:D:D

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Postby pinas » Fri Oct 08, 2004 9:34 pm

Dixie wrote:Really, Jellen? I'm coming over! :D:D:D


thanks for visiting our peaceful forum!!!
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Postby RedRose » Sat Oct 09, 2004 12:08 am

my ending for the story is so bad.... :cry: :cry: :cry:

I should delete it? hehe


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