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I have deleted my ending then, since you guys didn't love it :lol:
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Ohhh!! Why did you do that?? :evil:
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coz that ending was messing up the nice story :lol: :lol: :lol:
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But it's good to have options :D
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The story is sad,should I change the end:

It's the 100th days. Peter and Tina are sitting in the park which they went 100 days before.They keep silence just gazing into the grassplot,and then:

TINA: This morning, when I realized that it's the last day for our game,I felt so sad that I didn't want to get up...

PRTER:But, everythings will be over.I think it's the time to end this game.

Tina was sad,she can't understand why peter was so cold.Originally,she believed that they brought happy to each otherand sometimes she even think it will be good if peter become her real boyfriend.She asked:"Peter,don't you think we have a good time?I cherish everyday we've spent."

PETER: I don't think it's need to cherish,just let it pass.

Tina was so sad that she nearly weep and then
PETER :"I have a plan.A new game will be started."

TINA:A new game?

PETER:"yes, a new game." Peter took out a small box from his pocket and then fell on his knees in front of Tina , said:
"Tina, I hope you can play a new game with me. In that game,u are my wife and I will play a role of a good husband. the game time is the remainder of our lives.Do you want to accept it?"


The final is not need to write,I think everybody has the answer.
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RedRose wrote:I have deleted my ending then, since you guys didn't love it :lol:
no! don't delete it! i appreciate it! don't please. :? :(
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