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_Arale_

Love and Time

Post by _Arale_ » Fri Oct 01, 2004 7:36 am

One day, there were some friends going to an island. They were Love, Happiness, Sadness, Wealth. On the way, there was an unknown man asking to join them and they accepted.
Unfortunately, a sudden storm came and frightened them. All people quickly left the island and got in their boat, Happiness, Sadness and then Wealth. Only Love couldn't leave because her boat had been flown up. She was so scared and anxious. She called her friends on their boat.

"Wealth, help me please!", she called Wealth.

"I am really sorry, I am so heavy to carry you", Wealth said.

"Happiness, help me please!"

"I am so sorry, dear. I am so Happy to carry you on my boat", Happiness said.

"Sadness, help me!"

"I am sorry. I am so sad to help you", Sadness answered.
None of them helped poor Love. At that time, the unknown man came and picked her to his boat though his boat was so small. He helped her reach the bank safely. She said after that,

"Thank you so much. May I know who are you?"

"I am Time", the man said and vanished.

Yes, Love will remain forever with Time! ;)

_Arale_
Last edited by _Arale_ on Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:24 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Post by Dixie » Fri Oct 01, 2004 9:42 am

Arale, as always, brilliant Image

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Post by francine » Fri Oct 01, 2004 6:29 pm

WOOOOWWWWW........

:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:

that was fantastic......... :o
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Post by pinas » Fri Oct 01, 2004 6:38 pm

arale..once again..i've already received an email about that...
dalagang pilipina - a cool chick that is

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Post by _Arale_ » Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:14 pm

Thanks much Dixie and Francine!:)
Pinas, are you sure ? :wink:

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Post by mandy » Sat Oct 02, 2004 7:13 pm

oh god....
that was...
i'm speechless....
its so wonderful..really...
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."

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Post by pinas » Sun Oct 03, 2004 5:04 pm

Arale wrote:Thanks much Dixie and Francine!:)
Pinas, are you sure ? :wink:

_Arale_
yeah..with the same title as well!!!
dalagang pilipina - a cool chick that is

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Post by _Arale_ » Mon Oct 04, 2004 6:39 am

Ahh it is so wonderful because I made up it based on a Vietnam's children story.It is surely renewed in both words and plot.All words in the story were made up by myself.Hehe :wink:

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Post by mandy » Wed Oct 06, 2004 5:59 pm

you are so welcome arale.....
keep posting great stories like this one.. :)
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."

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Post by RedRose » Thu Oct 07, 2004 12:35 am

hmmmm....but I think love is transient, so is time. that is why Time would like to help Love :wink:

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Post by _Arale_ » Thu Oct 07, 2004 12:12 pm

Redrose wrote:
...but I think love is transient, so is time. that is why Time would like to help Love
Time proves how long and how much love is! :wink:

_Arale_

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Post by francine » Thu Oct 07, 2004 1:40 pm

Arale wrote:
Redrose wrote:
...but I think love is transient, so is time. that is why Time would like to help Love
Time proves how long and how much love is! :wink:

_Arale_
very well said... very well said.... very good.. very good...
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Post by jonrey10 » Thu Oct 07, 2004 1:48 pm

Time & Love prevailed... :D
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c",) I'm here... all the way c",)

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Post by vennini » Tue Mar 29, 2005 6:35 am

perfect
smile,smile,smile

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Post by amanita » Sat Jul 09, 2005 10:51 pm

oh it`s really intersting
thx :wink:
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I LIKE THE ARTICLE~~~

Post by northernwolf » Mon Nov 21, 2005 12:48 pm

THE ARTICLE GIVE US so much Thought,in fact ,the wealth ,happiness and sadness and so on is no important,it is important that we have love in our heart ,because it will give me fortunate living~~~

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love it too

Post by tikay » Tue Jan 03, 2006 9:42 pm

keep up the good work! I love the philosophy in the story...the moral is to wait and in time, love will be found...i always hope...thanks! :)

Admiral

Post by Admiral » Wed Jan 04, 2006 5:21 pm

nice! nice! nice!

I really hope that what you are saying is true.

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boat of time carries love

Post by tikay » Wed Jan 04, 2006 8:00 pm

It is beautiful...a whole philosophy lies in it...sweet.

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Post by Admiral » Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:55 am

Yeah, you are such right!

There was a girl. She was the one for whom I wrote so many love poems, was the prettiest one I have seen, was the one I fell in love at the first sight. :mrgreen:

I have waited for her, because she had had a boyfriend. (I came a little late)
And I really believed all the time that the time I spend in is worth.

It is

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Post by Golfygirl » Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:45 am

A beautifully perfect ending. What a great finish. It was such a relief for Love--she needed time.
Thanks :)

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Post by Admiral » Sun Jan 08, 2006 11:48 am

thanks very much, the last post means very much for me.
This is the most personal opinion I gave here on the board.

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Post by Arale » Sun Jan 08, 2006 3:17 pm

Admiral wrote:nice! nice! nice!

I really hope that what you are saying is true.
I believe that it's true. Do you? If you, I and others believe love remains forever with time, it will be true. :wink:

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Post by amanita » Sun Jan 15, 2006 7:43 am

yea ,i agree with you .
love never die even after long time! :wink:
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Post by Admiral » Sun Jan 15, 2006 9:39 am

Yes, that's a problem which comes up if you think back whether there is still love after she slept with so many others.

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Post by ginny » Sun Jan 15, 2006 9:42 am

Admiral wrote:Yes, that's a problem which comes up if you think back whether there is still love after she slept with so many others.
That's not LOVE. So you don't need to rethink with such a girl.

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Post by Admiral » Sun Jan 15, 2006 9:45 am

But then, what about
amanita (nice name) wrote:yea ,i agree with you .
love never die even after long time!
?

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Post by ginny » Sun Jan 15, 2006 9:51 am

Admiral wrote:But then, what about
amanita (nice name) wrote:yea ,i agree with you .
love never die even after long time!
?
It doesn't mean you can love anyone, 'sleep' with anyone and then coming back to your first love. I don't regard it as LOVE.

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Post by Admiral » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:04 am

Hey, wake up.
That's the real world, no matter if you regard or not.

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Post by Codby » Mon Feb 06, 2006 7:02 am

Time may bring loneliness,time may bring oblivion

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Post by ginny » Mon Feb 06, 2006 9:26 am

Codby wrote:Time may bring loneliness,time may bring oblivion
Yes, it's said that time can heal every wound but that's wrong. Time is our enemy. That love stays forever with time is good but it's so sad if love just stays forever in one heart.

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Post by sky888walker » Wed Feb 08, 2006 2:51 am

Many people are talking about love..
Many people are talking about eternity..
Many people are talking about everlasting love story..

but please tell me.. what a true love is ??
A simple answer using simple words from a simple and humble man

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