TO LOVE AGAIN......

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TO LOVE AGAIN......

Postby francine » Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:24 pm

It's only a matter of time that we must wait,
For us to compromise and put things into shape
Little by little we'll patch things up,
To fix the dreams that had been broken apart.

Nevertheless the pain that caused us to tears,
These pains we bear that made us strong to fight
Giving us courage to withstand all our fears,
To cope with our chances will it be alright.

So soon we'll see each other again,
Will things be fix or will remain the same?
It is for us to wait and see,
If love will be to grow again.

--francine-- :wink:

BTW, this is for my precious friend CHOPIN.
Although i've written this poem a long time ago, i'd still like to
dedicate this for you. You know who you are.
hehehehehe........ :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Dixie » Mon Oct 04, 2004 3:41 pm

Beautiful, Francine!! ImageImageImageImageImage

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Postby francine » Mon Oct 04, 2004 3:59 pm

Dixie wrote:Beautiful, Francine!! ImageImageImageImageImage


thank you.... :D glad you like it.... :D
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Postby pooh_bear » Mon Oct 04, 2004 4:59 pm

a double wow, although it's a sad poem...can relate? :roll:

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Postby francine » Mon Oct 04, 2004 8:12 pm

pooh_bear wrote:a double wow, although it's a sad poem...can relate? :roll:


can you? i know someone who can... it's CHOPIN. hehehe....
i'd like to dedicate it to her, however, she's not here.... :(
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Postby pooh_bear » Mon Oct 04, 2004 8:22 pm

francine wrote:
pooh_bear wrote:a double wow, although it's a sad poem...can relate? :roll:


can you? i know someone who can... it's CHOPIN. hehehe....
i'd like to dedicate it to her, however, she's not here.... :(


somehow... :(

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Re: TO LOVE AGAIN......

Postby pinas » Tue Oct 05, 2004 12:18 pm

francine wrote:It's only a matter of time that we must wait,
For us to compromise and put things into shape
Little by little we'll patch things up,
To fix the dreams that had been broken apart.

Nevertheless the pain that caused us to tears,
These pains we bear that made us strong to fight
Giving us courage to withstand all our fears,
To cope with our chances will it be alright.

So soon we'll see each other again,
Will things be fix or will remain the same?
It is for us to wait and see,
If love will be to grow again.


--francine-- :wink:

BTW, this is for my precious friend CHOPIN.
Although i've written this poem a long time ago, i'd still like to
dedicate this for you. You know who you are.
hehehehehe........ :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


so sweet of you, chopin told me that she liked it so much!!!
dalagang pilipina - a cool chick that is

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Re: TO LOVE AGAIN......

Postby francine » Tue Oct 05, 2004 1:21 pm

pinas wrote:so sweet of you, chopin told me that she liked it so much!!!


hehehe... i'm so happy she liked it... pls tell her i love her... and pls be kind to infinite... :wink:
hehehe.... beh! :shock: :D
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Postby pinas » Tue Oct 05, 2004 1:50 pm

she won't be handling infinite, sad to say...
but i really loved the poem...ummm...and she did, too...
it almost made me cry...and her, too....
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Postby francine » Tue Oct 05, 2004 1:52 pm

pinas wrote:she won't be handling infinite, sad to say...
but i really loved the poem...ummm...and she did, too...
it almost made me cry...and her, too....


hehehe... thought so... :wink:
i made that but i never thought that i would be dedicating it to you. :wink:
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Postby pinas » Tue Oct 05, 2004 2:00 pm

francine wrote:
pinas wrote:she won't be handling infinite, sad to say...
but i really loved the poem...ummm...and she did, too...
it almost made me cry...and her, too....


hehehe... thought so... :wink:
i made that but i never thought that i would be dedicating it to you. :wink:


but now...it's perfectly for me..or for her... :x
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Postby serenella » Tue Oct 05, 2004 6:07 pm

Really a beautiful poem Francine, both for its meaning and for its structure!

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Postby francine » Tue Oct 05, 2004 6:50 pm

serenella wrote:Really a beautiful poem Francine, both for its meaning and for its structure!


thank you so much serenella.... :D
i wish i could write more or another one but i really can't....
nothing's coming out of my mind anymore...
now i wonder how on earth was i able to write poems before...
:roll: :roll: :roll:
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Postby jonrey10 » Tue Oct 05, 2004 9:27 pm

Nice piece, Francine.
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c",) I'm here... all the way c",)

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Postby francine » Tue Oct 05, 2004 9:31 pm

jonrey10 wrote:Nice piece, Francine.


delayed reaction. :roll:
nway, thanks.. i appreciate that. :D :D :D
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Oct 07, 2004 1:46 pm

Francine, the Poet... :D
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Postby greatJim » Sun Oct 10, 2004 10:05 am

yes,a good poem.
i know Francine should be not only a child actress. :P :lol: :lol:


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