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When I recall (part two)

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When I recall (part two)

Post by greatJim » Sun Oct 10, 2004 10:33 am

I received the letter from Xiaoyi when i was working job.They said there was a letter from Beijing to me.And i was glad .
I often missed the classmates of Beijing.
On the bus of the firm which took us back to the room ,i opened the letter ,i knew it was from Xiaoyi,since i knew her handwriting as well.
But i stopped to finnish reading it when i looked the first sentence.
I was shocked ,like be awaked from a dream.
As you can imagine,also what i have said at the beginning of the story,in the letter,she said she had been married.
After about several months after i received the letter,I came back to Beijng.
I thought it over,and knew i had been too late.

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Post by Dixie » Sun Oct 10, 2004 12:23 pm

So what happened next? :roll:

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Post by greatJim » Mon Oct 11, 2004 7:43 am

One knows what he lives for is happy.But unfortunately,I was always not such a person.
I looked the letter from the beginning to the end in my little room.And you can guess how confused my heart was at that time.
In that moment i thought i was a loser.And in common sense,I really was.
What i thought ,as you could imagine,was leaving from others' sight.Or dissapearing quickly.
BUt where can I go?
I really like an animal in those days,when at last one night when i was walking aimlessly on the street I met an old friend of mine,a girl who was my classmate in the secondary school.

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Post by greatJim » Tue Oct 12, 2004 11:51 am

Yes,sometimes when you think the life is just to begin,actually it has gone to the end.
So my story will also end here.
As you had seen,that night I chatted with my classemate for long time.She persuaded me to start a new life.
And I launched a firm by my own.
I never went back to BEijing again.
Just few weeks ago,I tried to loose myself,and went to Phillipines,I had drunk too much again,And decided to have a rest there.
I recalled the old times,and thought of Xiaoyi again.I thought to write something ,for suvinior.
I know when I talk it over,I will recover.
So now I have done it.
Maybe you are curious of who is my wife.And i can say the answer to you.She is the girl who said me like an alien that night when we were dancing in the disco.
She was the new colleague of me at that time.And I was 22 that year,1995.SHe was 22 too.She has a cute name.They all call her "P-I-N-A-s."
(OVER)
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Post by Dixie » Tue Oct 12, 2004 11:55 am

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Post by pinas » Tue Oct 12, 2004 1:08 pm

greatJim wrote:Yes,sometimes when you think the life is just to begin,actually it has gone to the end.
So my story will also end here.
As you had seen,that night I chatted with my classemate for long time.She persuaded me to start a new life.
And I launched a firm by my own.
I never went back to BEijing again.
Just few weeks ago,I tried to loose myself,and went to Phillipines,I had drunk too much again,And decided to have a rest there.
I recalled the old times,and thought of Xiaoyi again.I thought to write something ,for suvinior.
I know when I talk it over,I will recover.
So now I have done it.
Maybe you are curious of who is my wife.And i can say the answer to you.She is the girl who said me like an alien that night when we were dancing in the disco.
She was the new colleague of me at that time.And I was 22 that year,1995.SHe was 22 too.She has a cute name.They all call her "P-I-N-A-s."
(OVER)
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me??? :oops:
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Post by francine » Tue Oct 12, 2004 1:52 pm

OMG! OMG! OMG! LOL
hahahahaha..... so pinas huh?!?! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Post by pooh_bear » Tue Oct 12, 2004 6:00 pm

:shock: :shock: :shock: i was really waiting for the answer and seriously reading it..okay i'll just.... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Post by greatJim » Wed Oct 13, 2004 3:04 am

I am sorry,but ...but it is just a story,a novel.
I mean the truth is not very important ,and i just think pinas should be there.
Anyway,I am not the real "I" in the story.
I hope it could be understood.
:P :P :P

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Post by pinas » Wed Oct 13, 2004 10:24 am

greatJim wrote:I am sorry,but ...but it is just a story,a novel.
I mean the truth is not very important ,and i just think pinas should be there.
Anyway,I am not the real "I" in the story.
I hope it could be understood.
:P :P :P
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Post by greatJim » Thu Oct 14, 2004 3:43 am

pooh_bear wrote::shock: :shock: :shock: i was really waiting for the answer and seriously reading it..okay i'll just.... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
To read 1 Jim's novel = to read 10 english novels of Shakespere
=talking love for 20 years =appreciate 1 masterpiece of oil-painting

:cry: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
hahahahaha

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Post by Dixie » Fri Oct 15, 2004 11:58 am

Sorry Jim but Shakespeare didn't write novels. He wrote plays.

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Post by greatJim » Thu Oct 28, 2004 5:51 am

I should give some explaination on this story.
Basicly the story was true,and the girl ever played her hair before me when we worked in the same place.
Pinas also has long hair,I think hers is longer than the girl's .Sometimes people will be in the status of obcessing.like I have .
So now Pinas has unlocked the lock for me.That's what my story really want to say.
By the way,Pinas is more beautiful ,and I know if one is healthier,the hair of her also can grow more good,not easily to diverge on the end.
Thanks to Pinas.with sincere .

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Post by Lilian » Tue Mar 15, 2005 3:28 pm

ah! ok, the story has quite ending. so far as, now i read ur story and know about u better than before.

i liked the part, u said, when it seemed to start something new, on the other had something is going to end. but if u give a positive look at it, u will find " when something close infront of u, u will find something new is coming to u....

grass is always greener on the other side....


keep writing ur story.. :D
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