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Better Luck Next Time!

Postby Asep » Mon Oct 11, 2004 7:00 am

Wish I could write well. But no matter what, I hate writing many long sentences unless I know I'll get something really valuable in return. :(
Better luck next time.
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_Arale_

Postby _Arale_ » Mon Oct 11, 2004 2:01 pm

Oh My God ! Asep,how long your post is !I don't meant sentenses.Asep,did you do your homework? :evil:

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Postby francine » Mon Oct 11, 2004 8:07 pm

huh?!?! i'm not seeing any. :?: :?: :?: :roll: :roll: :roll:
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Postby Dixie » Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:06 am

There aren't any :evil:

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Postby francine » Tue Oct 12, 2004 1:54 pm

Dixie wrote:There aren't any :evil:


ok.. so that's why.... i thought it's a technical thing again. sorry..... i'm being slow again..... :oops: :lol: :lol: :lol: :roll:
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Postby jonrey10 » Tue Oct 12, 2004 1:55 pm

A long blank post.... :shock:
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Postby Dixie » Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:37 pm

Interesting Image Makes you think Image

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Postby francine » Wed Oct 13, 2004 2:01 pm

Dixie wrote:Interesting Image Makes you think Image


yah... i agree... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
made me laugh as well when i found out that i was being stupid again... thinking and was really confused when there's really nothing to be confused. :roll: :roll: :roll: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Better Luck Next Time!

Postby serenella » Thu Oct 14, 2004 3:06 pm

Asep wrote:Wish I could write well. But no matter what, I hate writing many long sentences unless I know I'll get something really valuable in return. :(

What do you mean with 'something really valuable in return'? :o























































































































































































































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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Oct 14, 2004 4:40 pm

The joke's on us...
He should've posted it in Jokes... :D
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Postby francine » Thu Oct 14, 2004 5:02 pm

good idea. hey, asep. why don't you transfer it instead. oops... on the second thought...it's the moderator who should be doing that right?
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Postby Dixie » Thu Oct 14, 2004 10:15 pm

Depends on who the moderator is :P

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Postby Asep » Fri Oct 15, 2004 3:20 am

Like I said, I hate writing long sentences unless I know I'll have something really valuable in return. Hehe.... :)
So the repeated ENTERs were the only way I could take advantage of to make it look like a long short story. Hehe.... :D :D

But why don't you guys take a close look at the first entry above. Now who's making a joke? :lol: :lol:

OK, dear, put this topic somewhere else, will you? :wink:

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Postby Dixie » Fri Oct 15, 2004 12:00 pm

No, I can't, I'm not the mod here :D


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