My first poem

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RedRose

My first poem

Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:27 pm

I just said I was not good at poem, but guys encouraged me to try write some poems. here is my poem. here you go! :lol:

The Life

When we feel hungry,
we have to get something to eat;
When we feel tired,
we have to go to bed;
When we eat too much food,
we have to go to toilet;
.......

then, what if we need to communicate with our friends?
oh, we can post something here! :lol:

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:30 pm

Hahahah!!!!!

100% Redrose!!!! ImageImageImageImageImage

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Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:31 pm

Guys! I know this is a VERY BAD poem!

If you think it really sucks, please don't kick me out!

I swear I would never post any poem here!

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Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:33 pm

Dixie wrote:Hahahah!!!!!

100% Redrose!!!! ImageImageImageImageImage
thanks Dixie for your generosity! :cry: :lol:

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:34 pm

Nooo!!! please, do!!! Image

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Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:36 pm

ok, thanks dixie, I will! as long as you guys will not feel sick in reading my poems :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:40 pm

We won't Image

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Post by _Arale_ » Mon Oct 25, 2004 6:10 am

Redrose, it is not bad at all. You are telling the truth that no one talks about.I like your poems. Great!!!!! :wink:

_Arale_

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Post by RedRose » Mon Oct 25, 2004 10:17 am

haha! thanks Arlae! :lol:

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Post by francine » Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:51 pm

that's a nice one redrose! it's nice,really! :D keep posting! :wink:
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Post by RedRose » Mon Oct 25, 2004 2:02 pm

haha! I just thank you guys so much! you see, I posted a "poem" here, and I had never thought the so-called poem would be popular! and yes, I will keep posting!ImageImageImage

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Post by _Arale_ » Thu Oct 28, 2004 1:53 pm

yesssssssss ! keep making poem,Redrose! I am your fan! :wink:
I am waiting for your next one.

_Arale_

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Post by RedRose » Thu Oct 28, 2004 2:02 pm

thanks, dear Arale...

you are the only fan of mine so far! so I would compose some nice poems for my fan :lol: Image

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