My second poem

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My second poem

Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 23, 2004 3:10 pm

Nice toilet

wow, toilet!
what a nice place you are!
where we can relax ourselves so much!
where we even can read some english novels,
where we can call our friends on phone,
where we can surf on internet with a laptop!

wow, once again,
Toilet, what a gorgeous place you are!
I love you!

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 23, 2004 3:16 pm

Hahaha!!!!!!

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where we can surf on internet with a laptop!
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Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 23, 2004 3:26 pm

thank you, dear moderator!
:oops: :oops: :oops:

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 23, 2004 3:31 pm

You're more than welcome, dear mod ;)

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Re: My second poem

Post by Dixie » Sun Oct 24, 2004 10:39 pm

RedRose wrote:Nice toilet

wow, toilet!
what a nice place you are!
where we can relax ourselves so much!
where we even can read some english novels,
where we can call our friends on phone,
where we can surf on internet with a laptop!

wow, once again,
Toilet, what a gorgeous place you are!
I love you!
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Post by _Arale_ » Mon Oct 25, 2004 6:08 am

Redrose, it is a great poem!!!!!!Do you know why? It brings us funs.That is the best thing,I mean. :wink:
Create more,Redrose!

_Arale_

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Post by RedRose » Mon Oct 25, 2004 10:18 am

thank Arale again! Due to you guys' encouragements, I will write more poems( if then can be called poems :lol: :lol: )

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Post by francine » Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:58 pm

hehehehe... i never thought that someone would write a poem regarding toilet. hahahaha....... nice try. :wink: Image
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Post by RedRose » Mon Oct 25, 2004 2:04 pm

honey, maybe someday I will write a poem just about ~,hehehehe.

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Post by francine » Mon Oct 25, 2004 2:05 pm

RedRose wrote:honey, maybe someday I will write a poem just for ~,hehehehe.
oh no!!! just make sure it won't be gross... hahaha... :lol:
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Post by RedRose » Mon Oct 25, 2004 2:06 pm

Don't worry.... :lol:

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Post by Unknownsu » Tue Oct 26, 2004 12:21 am

You never fail to amaze me...

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Post by RedRose » Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:06 am

Unknownsu wrote:You never fail to amaze me...
Teacher! Teacher! Teacher! what a surprise!

no your message for a long time! :cry: I miss you a lot! my teacher! how are you? I hope you are ok!

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Post by Unknownsu » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:54 am

Yes, I haven't been on for a while now and I noticed that your English have yet to improve. You better keep practising or I will have no choice but to expel you.
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Post by RedRose » Tue Oct 26, 2004 5:38 am

Don't expel me! Teacher! I will keep practising my english! Believe me!Image

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Post by True Fire » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:01 pm

So funny a poem has shown us Redrose's endless love for a toilet. Do you know what happened to me after I have read ths poem? I always have a imagination that there is a redrose in my toilet.hehe!
Noun by Noun, Verb by Verb: It is details that make writing interesting.

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Post by RedRose » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:12 pm

haha! that must be a romantic toilet then! :lol:
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Post by True Fire » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:39 pm

Redrose had painted a rose picture of the toilet. I borrowed the expression 'paint a rose picture of sth' from the two sentences below:
The article paints a bleak (= hopeless) picture of the future.
He painted a rosy (= happy) picture of family life.

From now on, I know 'rose' has another meaning: happy.
I love rose, especially a redrose!
Noun by Noun, Verb by Verb: It is details that make writing interesting.

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Post by RedRose » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:42 pm

thanks for your loveImage

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Post by Unknownsu » Tue Oct 26, 2004 8:36 pm

Regardless of what you do or say, if I don't see any improvement, you're going to be expelled. I can't have a student like you destroy my reputation of being a competent teacher.

Word of advice: writing poems about toilets does not help your cause. LoL!

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Post by francine » Tue Oct 26, 2004 8:49 pm

Unknownsu wrote:Regardless of what you do or say, if I don't see any improvement, you're going to be expelled. I can't have a student like you destroy my reputation of being a competent teacher.

Word of advice: writing poems about toilets does not help your cause. LoL!
hey, it's not that bad. i mean. what redrose posted is beautiful. i can see that you have high standards. :wink:
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Post by RedRose » Wed Oct 27, 2004 12:06 am

thank francine for your understanding.Image

but my teacher, unkownsu, so soon as I want to write a poem, I just recall nothing but toilet! I don't know why I always remember toilet!

But teacher, you see, my poem about toilet is so popular. that means, under your guidance, I am becoming a nice student.

and teacher, next time, maybe I can write a poem about ~ or constipation instead? :oops: :oops:

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Post by Unknownsu » Wed Oct 27, 2004 3:42 am

My standards are high only when it comes to Redrose. She is the only student I am teaching, therefore, her English skills reflect me as a teacher.

Redrose, if you compose a poem about ~ or constipation, you better at least make it a half decent one this time!

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Post by RedRose » Wed Oct 27, 2004 6:05 am

Unknownsu wrote: Redrose, if you compose a poem about ~ or constipation, you better at least make it a half decent one this time!
Sweet teacher, I always practice my english with diligent. Coz I always worry that my bad english might ruin the fine reputation of my teacher. so, I learn English day and night!

And I will take your order to post a decent poem about ~ or constipation here. If my next poem is nice, just let me know, ok?

Teacher, I had never thought that my poem about toilet would be so popular! now I know people all like my toilet poem, and I know that I am winning honour for my teacher!
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Post by francine » Wed Oct 27, 2004 1:25 pm

yeah, i agree. i love that toilet poem as well. i admire redrose of posting such poem like that. it simply means that she can write a poem about everything or anything under the sun. unlike others who can only write a poem about one topic. i can say, that she's pretty talented! :wink:
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Post by RedRose » Wed Oct 27, 2004 1:39 pm

francine wrote:yeah, i agree. i love that toilet poem as well. i admire redrose of posting such poem like that. it simply means that she can write a poem about everything or anything under the sun. unlike others who can only write a poem about one topic. i can say, that she's pretty talented! :wink:
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Due to you guys' nice compliments, another nice poem is brewing in my mind, it is about constipation. and I guess I will talk about the constipation in detailImage

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Post by francine » Wed Oct 27, 2004 1:52 pm

RedRose wrote:thanks sweet!Image
Due to you guys' nice compliments, another nice poem is brewing in my mind, it is about constipation. and I guess I will talk about the constipation in detailImage
oh no.... :? oh, my God.... i think my praises to you was too much.... :? :? :? :? :?
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Post by RedRose » Wed Oct 27, 2004 2:18 pm

hahahahahahahaha! dear francine! you are the funniest one of all EC members!!
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Post by francine » Wed Oct 27, 2004 2:28 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: i just hope i'm funny in a nice way.
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: hehehe...
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Post by RedRose » Wed Oct 27, 2004 2:34 pm

francine wrote::lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: i just hope i'm funny in a good way.
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Post by francine » Wed Oct 27, 2004 2:38 pm

hey, thanks. :oops: :D ImageImage
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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 30, 2004 5:18 pm

PoLoo wrote:I always have a imagination that there is a redrose in my toilet.hehe!
Huhuhuh he thinks of RedRose every time he goes to the bathroom!!! :D:D:D Image

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Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 30, 2004 5:20 pm

this imagination is nice for poloo! he has a good time with toilet!

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 30, 2004 5:21 pm

Of course he has a good time, since he imagines you in the bathroom... ImageImageImageImageImage

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Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 30, 2004 5:23 pm

I hope that the imagination won't bring him constipation :lol:

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 30, 2004 5:24 pm

I bet it doesn't :D On the contrary... ;)

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