my love

autumn04 · Post by **autumn04** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:19 am

I STAND IN THE RAIN
MY HEART HAS A PAIN
I LOVE MY FRIEND :(
AND IT NEVER ENDS :(

Unknownsu · Post by **Unknownsu** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:52 am

Nice concise little poem. I think you could expand a bit but that's my own opinion...Well done!

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 8:44 pm

Unknownsu wrote:Nice concise little poem. I think you could expand a bit but that's my own opinion...Well done!

teacher, you are always generous to give your compliments to other people..

contrary, you are always stingy to praise me...

what a strict teacher you are

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 10:59 pm

Who is Unknownzu? :D

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 1:45 am

honey, Unknowsu is my first internet english teacher from Canada. but he is a banana. I mean, his parents are chinese and they used to live in vietnam.

Dixie, as you did, Unknowsu taught me english so much. however, he is a very strict teacher! he always threatened to expel me!

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 9:15 am

RedRose wrote:but he is a banana.