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_Arale_

some sudden poems

Post by _Arale_ » Thu Oct 28, 2004 1:46 pm

Francise, I bring them all here as you wishes! :wink: Thanks for enjoying it! :wink:

No one knows who is he
Even God who created people
God said:"I made you not completed
that is why you should find out
A friend who is somewhere
understands you much!"
That is why people make friends
And we are here to do that then
don't need to see each other
only through your words
I know you are a nice person. :wink:


Hey my dear tahrer
Not all people could
do a good poem
but let's try and try
as I've done that
I know it may(be) bad
but it makes you smile
that for me,enough
because I know that
you are lonely now
not be sad please!

Life is full of funs
read my poem then
and you may say that
"I've never read
such a bad poem"
I don't care it's good
or it's a bad one
All I want is to
See your bright face! :wink:



Life is full of funs
As I've said that
Though we have to face
with many challenges
keep sweet smiles
on your bright face
I'm here and you're there
we are in heaven
forget all tears and sadness
and be braver when we turn back the life
let's try my friend
don't worry you're lonely
I am here and I am by your side
even though we never meet. :wink:



It is a nice gift
to meet you today
but time runs so fast
so I gotta go
though I am not here
but (I) have your image
in my heart and mind
My friend do you know?
I was so glad
you wiped my worry
(and) brought my dream back
let me always see
smiles on your face
that is so great
tahrer you think so? :wink:

_Arale_

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Post by _Arale_ » Thu Oct 28, 2004 1:49 pm

Arale wrote:
Francise, I bring them all here as you wishes! Thanks for enjoying it! :wink:
Opps!!! sorry for my mistake.
>>>>>>>>as you wished. :wink:

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Post by RedRose » Thu Oct 28, 2004 2:09 pm

this poem is just for tahrer :wink: on wonder why I didn't get the poem then :lol:

and I bet Arale loves tahrer crazily! :lol: :lol:

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Post by _Arale_ » Thu Oct 28, 2004 3:03 pm

Redrose wrote:
this poem is just for tahrer on wonder why I didn't get the poem then :wink:

and I bet Arale loves tahrer crazily! :lol:
For Redrose!!!

Redrose do you know
I love all people
As we are good friends
tahrer-she gave me
the inspiration
as you're doing now :wink:
I could make poem
When I have friends
I will try my best
to make good poems
Read it now and then
and don't forget that
there is a friend
from a far place
praying for you
It is me- your friend-Arale. :wink:

I know my sudden poems are so simple but greatly significant,right? :wink: Hope to bring you smiles when you read them.Thank you all. :wink:

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Post by francine » Thu Oct 28, 2004 3:11 pm

it did. it did make me smile. thanks for that arale. how about a poem for me... heheh... :oops: :roll: :D
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Post by _Arale_ » Thu Oct 28, 2004 3:23 pm

For francine !!!!!!!!

Hey not be shy francine :wink:
as it is a gift
for me to make poem
This poem for you
I write by my heart
I write by my sense
Do you know my friend
I never thought that
I could make poem
that is you my dear
help me to do that
but I want is that
seeing you happy
great to be here
where we are together
promise me a word
see again in heaven!!! :wink:(hehe)

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PS: I gotta go now see you then and take care! :wink:

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Post by francine » Thu Oct 28, 2004 3:26 pm

ya. thank you so much arale. you have a nice day. ok? :wink:
take care. we'll see each other in heaven. :wink:
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Post by RedRose » Thu Oct 28, 2004 7:36 pm

thanks Arale. I got your poem now. it made me smile :wink:

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Post by Dixie » Thu Oct 28, 2004 10:54 pm

Araleeeeeeeeeeeee

Where's my poem?? :oops: :oops: :roll: :roll:

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Post by _Arale_ » Fri Oct 29, 2004 11:56 am

For Dixie !!!

I still remember
The first day (I) came here
There was a nice girl
so friendly and sweet
said hello with me
She made me feel that
I am not lonely here
She is so kind and nice
as an angel
Dixie-it is you :wink:

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Post by Dixie » Fri Oct 29, 2004 12:01 pm

Ohhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much!!!!!!!! Image

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Post by _Arale_ » Fri Oct 29, 2004 12:04 pm

Thanks much Dixie,your kiss is so sweet!!!!! :oops: :wink:

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Post by pinas » Fri Oct 29, 2004 12:06 pm

why don't i have one? is it because i seldom visit the forum.... :cry:
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Post by _Arale_ » Fri Oct 29, 2004 12:12 pm

For Pinas !!!

Please don't cry pinas
Though you seldom come here
we are still friends
and it is funny for all of us
to meet again in this forum
Please don't cry please don't cry
I only want to see your face
with thousands of smiles
Please smile please smile
It is the best thing
I've ever seen
in all my life... :wink:

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Post by Dixie » Fri Oct 29, 2004 12:15 pm

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Post by francine » Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:40 pm

you're really great arale! and i say you're very talented. Image
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Post by pinas » Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:47 pm

Arale wrote:For Pinas !!!

Please don't cry pinas
Though you seldom come here
we are still friends
and it is funny for all of us
to meet again in this forum
Please don't cry please don't cry
I only want to see your face
with thousands of smiles
Please smile please smile
It is the best thing
I've ever seen
in all my life... :wink:

_Arale_
wow thanks..
that was like an impromptu thing, huh...
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Post by _Arale_ » Sat Oct 30, 2004 11:48 am

pinas wrote:
that was like an impromptu thing, huh...
yes pinas, all poems in this page are impromptus. :wink:

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 30, 2004 11:51 am

Thumbs up for Arale, our EC poetess!!!!!!!!! ImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImage

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Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 30, 2004 1:44 pm

congratulations, Arale! I thought I was the real poetess on EC. now I know that Arale deserves this nickname! :lol: coz you can write really decent poems, unlike me, just can write some poems about ~ or toilet or constipation :oops: :oops: :oops:

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 30, 2004 2:08 pm

RedRose wrote: unlike me, just can write some poems about ~ or toilet or constipation :oops: :oops: :oops:
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Post by _Arale_ » Sat Oct 30, 2004 2:33 pm

Oh I am so happy
When I've seen you love my poems
My Redrose please
not show a shy face here
as I think you're also great
I love your poem
It makes me smile laugh and
Don't be shy don't be shy
Friends are the best
We have in our life
Keep doing keep doing
as you have done that
as I had told you
we must try we must try
and my trong belief
tells me you could do
You must bear in mind
the proverb you have under your nick
"If you think you can you can" :wink:

Best wishes !!!!!

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Post by Dixie » Sat Oct 30, 2004 2:48 pm

Once again, brilliant!!!!!!

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Post by True Fire » Sat Oct 30, 2004 2:50 pm

Here arose a gifted female poet! congratulations!

I read special feeling out of the first poem written for Tahrer, nevertheless, the other poems also have expressed Arale's concern for these eye-catching females.
Noun by Noun, Verb by Verb: It is details that make writing interesting.

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Post by RedRose » Sat Oct 30, 2004 3:04 pm

thanks dear Arale! I have your encouragements in my mind, that is what I need! besides, you have to admit: your poems are more graceful than mine :lol:

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Post by _Arale_ » Sun Oct 31, 2004 5:34 am

Poloo wrote:

Here arose a gifted female poet! congratulations!

I read special feeling out of the first poem written for Tahrer, nevertheless, the other poems also have expressed Arale's concern for these eye-catching females.
Thank you so much Poloo.As I had said I create poems to bring my friends happinesses and funs and you are one of. I feel so happy when seeing you all like my poems. Life outside is hard enough,so let our life here be happy. :wink:

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Post by Dixie » Sun Oct 31, 2004 10:48 am

PoLoo wrote:I read special feeling out of the first poem written for Tahrer
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