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Grandmom

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Grandmom
(Tang Ba than yeu)

Grandmom where are you?
Do you hear I'm calling in the dark
Grandmom where are you?
Do you hear I'm crying

I've found you everywhere
Why didn't I meet
My Grandmom-you were so sweet
You taught me to love
You taught me to share
You grew me up by warm smiles and hugs

You kissed my pains
You healed my hurts
You made my life so warm and safe

Grandmom where are you?
I've found you everywhere
In my dreams, in my childhood
I didn't see my Grandmom, why?

Grandmom! Come back to me
I'll never(be) lonely though life is so large
I'm still so childish in your eyes, I know

In my dreams you told me that
"Never lonely you are my kid
I'm here by your side
Still smile when you are glad
And wipe your tears when you cry
Please don't cry, my dear child
I'm always here by your side"

Grandmom you are here, I know
You are my angel, my heart, my soul...

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Last edited by _Arale_ on Tue Nov 09, 2004 10:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Dixie »

Arale...

Don't ever do this to me...

You made me cry ...
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Post by _Arale_ »

Dixie, this poem I made for my dear Grandmom who is always the most important person in my life. She passed away last month.It was written by my deepest pain!

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Yeah, I guessed something happened while reading the poem since you put all your feelings in there... Sorry to hear about your gradma passsing away... Your poem made me think of my own grandma. She passed away eight years ago but I still miss her so much... That's why the poem made me cry.
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Dear Dixie,
I am crying with you here too.

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Well, let's cheer up, ok? ;) I just posted some jokes, check them out!
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yes thanks Dixie. I am smiling ! :wink:

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Glad to read that ;)
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Arale, well done!
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If your grandmother could read this poem burst out from the bottom of your heart, she would be very happy.
Noun by Noun, Verb by Verb: It is details that make writing interesting.
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Thank you Poloo. I strongly believe she understands my deep feelings and my love for her though she is illiterate.

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You don't need to be a literate person in order to understand the true meaning of love ;)
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Dixie, you are right.Love is uncountable right? :wink:

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:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

Why did you remind me of great grandmom, mommy? I can't help crying now....

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Don't cry! Asep! ciggarette will help you! :lol:
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Cigarettes can't help us in any sense.
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Post by RedRose »

I see :cry: :cry: :cry:
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Asep wrote:
Why did you remind me of great grandmom, mommy? I can't help crying now....
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: ....
I am so sorry Asep but I cannot help falling in deep emotion. My love for her is so great. Don't make me cry!

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Hey guys cheer up, we are here to have some fun, not to be sad!
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kitkat wrote:
that was very nice.. sure your grandma is very proud having a grandson like you.. :wink:
Thank you but I am not a grandson. :wink:

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Post by francine »

Arale wrote:
kitkat wrote:
that was very nice.. sure your grandma is very proud having a grandson like you.. :wink:
Thank you but I am not a grandson. :wink:

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she's a granddaughter. :wink:
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