summer love (other version)

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Wed Nov 17, 2004 6:21 am

summer love is like watermelon,
juicy and fresh.

summer love is like apple,
kinda acid and fragile.

summer love is like banana,
smooth and sweet.

in short,
summer love is delicious,
you'd better eat it off
and excrete it from anus

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sorry, if you guys think my poem is lousy, just let me know, I will delete it

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Wed Nov 17, 2004 2:15 pm

Hahahahahahahha

As I was reading, I thought: "How sweet..." Until I reached the end:

in short,
summer love is delicious,
you'd better eat it off
and excrete it from anus

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Wed Nov 17, 2004 3:27 pm

what is wrong with the end sentence, dixie?

haha

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Wed Nov 17, 2004 4:16 pm

Absolutely nothing

That final stanza just made my mind change from "How sweet" to "How funny!"

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Thu Nov 18, 2004 1:38 am

haha! that is good!