MY DREAM

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_Arale_

MY DREAM

Post by _Arale_ » Thu Nov 18, 2004 1:22 pm

MY DREAM !

All people have dreams
Some are so great, some are so small
Some have been completed, some never become true
My never-become-true dream is that
I want to become a painter

I used to dream of
painting the Milky Way
painting the meadow in a winter day
with some wild flowers and some rabbits ):

I want to paint
another smile of Monalisa
as Leonard de Vinci ever did that
I want to paint
another family in poverty
Standing hopelessly on the beach
I want much to feel
their hurt, their pain
And Picasso's love

I want to paint
snow in your eyes
I want to paint
Sunrise and sunset
I want to paint
the mellow smile of a child
To make our life more splendid

I want to hold the world
In my paintings that haven't been painted yet
I never become a painter, I know
So let me paint the life
In my colourful spirit!!! ;)

_Arale_
Last edited by _Arale_ on Tue Jan 04, 2005 6:31 am, edited 3 times in total.

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Post by Dixie » Thu Nov 18, 2004 3:25 pm

Arale, as always... Amazing! You should publish your poems!! ImageImageImageImage

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Post by serenella » Thu Nov 18, 2004 5:13 pm

Yes, you should publish a book with all your poems!!

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Post by True Fire » Thu Nov 18, 2004 8:51 pm

Admiration!
Noun by Noun, Verb by Verb: It is details that make writing interesting.

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Post by Awisewizard » Mon Feb 21, 2005 7:14 am

A nice one really. So can you paint or not? :P
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Wow..

Post by amoolah » Mon Feb 21, 2005 9:27 am

Wow...I love it..actually I enjoy watching the paints :lol: but I am not a good painter :cry:
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Post by vennini » Tue Mar 01, 2005 7:56 am

ELEGANT
smile,smile,smile

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Re: Wow..

Post by _Arale_ » Sat Mar 05, 2005 3:28 pm

amoolah wrote:Wow...I love it..actually I enjoy watching the paints :lol: but I am not a good painter :cry:
Hi amoolah,
The same here. :( As you see in my poem, it is just in my dream. Poor me and you!!! :cry: :mrgreen:

_Arale_

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