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True Fire
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by True Fire » Sat Nov 20, 2004 3:14 pm
When I am alone
I may find a book
And thumb it
And turn it over
And I will meet somebody in it
And I will get some sighs out of it
And then a snake crawls out
Directly into the bottom of my heart
When I am alone
I may be with myself
Have a wander
Let go my steps
And may run into the sports meeting attened by ants
And may dance at the rhythm performed by trees and wind
And may come to the wildness with no one else
Resting my head on a piece of afterglow
Watching the small river in distance
Which flows
Out of an old photo
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hope4422
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by hope4422 » Sat Nov 20, 2004 7:13 pm
I love being alone
with a book but not a snake
i think you better work on your rthyme ( i hope i spelt right)
hope is life
Shahid
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Location: Pakistan
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by Shahid » Sun Nov 21, 2004 3:06 am
very nice . i would like to ask a question to you. do u like to live along?
True Fire
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by True Fire » Mon Nov 22, 2004 1:44 pm
hope4422 wrote: I love being alone
with a book but not a snake
i think you better work on your rthyme ( i hope i spelt right)
thanks
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True Fire
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by True Fire » Mon Nov 22, 2004 1:48 pm
Shahid wrote: very nice . i would like to ask a question to you. do u like to live along?
I don't like being alone. but I am alone now.
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francine
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by francine » Tue Nov 23, 2004 11:38 pm
does it really need to have snakes? of all the animals, why snakes? eeeewwww..... scary...... :? :? :( :? :?
True Fire
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by True Fire » Wed Nov 24, 2004 1:44 am
francine wrote: does it really need to have snakes? of all the animals, why snakes? eeeewwww..... scary...... :? :? :( :? :?
so what do you think should it be?
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