The way I feel

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Lee
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The way I feel

Post by Lee » Wed Dec 29, 2004 10:47 am

The Way I Feel

My heart has been waiting
For someone like you
My heart has been yearning
For a love that's so true

I don't know why
I get speechless around you
The words are hidden inside of me
And I can't tell you that I love what I see

I guess you never really liked me
Cause if you did, you would've known
That my heart is full of love for you
More love than I've ever shown.


By: Lee

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_Arale_

Post by _Arale_ » Wed Dec 29, 2004 11:21 am

Lee, it is nice but sad. :(

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Post by Lee » Wed Dec 29, 2004 9:09 pm

Yeah...its little sad poem

This poem is for the man who can't get the girl of his dream. ;)

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Post by RedRose » Thu Dec 30, 2004 12:35 am

I wish I could write such a decent poem as you did ;)

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Post by Dixie » Thu Dec 30, 2004 11:12 am

Lee, I loved the poem!!!! Did you really write it?? It's so wonderful...

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Post by francine » Sat Jan 01, 2005 12:35 pm

nice! i love it. ;)
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Post by greatJim » Sat Jan 01, 2005 4:55 pm

want to sing it.like jazz music.

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Post by Lee » Thu Jan 06, 2005 9:20 am

Thanks Fellas
Thank you so much for your comments.....

I will right more poem if that makes you feel happy and and truly and honestly i wrote that poem ..... ;)

Thank you Once again :mrgreen:

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Post by Shahid » Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:27 am

hey lee its for me or alina
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Re: The way I feel

Post by Miss. Ladybird » Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:33 am

Lee wrote: I don't know why
I get speechless around you
what can I say about this poem....I am speechless........
wonderful...... Lee. Excellent work :R: :R: :R:

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The way I feel

Post by Ali Yousef » Fri Jan 21, 2005 8:50 pm

You offered a love that was real, didnt you?
And that's the way that I feel,too.
A language does have its limits,
but the verse
that can be created from it is
only as limited as are the abilities
of the one who writes.

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