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Lee
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by Lee »
The Way I Feel
My heart has been waiting
For someone like you
My heart has been yearning
For a love that's so true
I don't know why
I get speechless around you
The words are hidden inside of me
And I can't tell you that I love what I see
I guess you never really liked me
Cause if you did, you would've known
That my heart is full of love for you
More love than I've ever shown.
By: Lee
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_Arale_
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by _Arale_ »
Lee, it is nice but sad. :(
_Arale_
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Lee
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by Lee »
Yeah...its little sad poem
This poem is for the man who can't get the girl of his dream. ;)
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RedRose
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by RedRose »
I wish I could write such a decent poem as you did ;)
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Dixie
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by Dixie »
Lee, I loved the poem!!!! Did you really write it?? It's so wonderful...
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francine
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by francine »
nice! i love it. ;)
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greatJim
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by greatJim »
want to sing it.like jazz music.
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Lee
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by Lee »
Thanks Fellas
Thank you so much for your comments.....
I will right more poem if that makes you feel happy and and truly and honestly i wrote that poem ..... ;)
Thank you Once again
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Shahid
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by Shahid »
hey lee its for me or alina
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Miss. Ladybird
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by Miss. Ladybird »
Lee wrote:
I don't know why
I get speechless around you
what can I say about this poem....I am speechless........
wonderful...... Lee. Excellent work :R: :R: :R:
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Ali Yousef
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by Ali Yousef »
You offered a love that was real, didnt you?
And that's the way that I feel,too.
A language does have its limits,
but the verse
that can be created from it is
only as limited as are the abilities
of the one who writes.