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Love you because …
You make me feel I’m me
You make me feel I’m free
You make me feel I’m like a tree
Which is I stay forever in one place
Which is I’ll never be gone away from you

The way you take me to your heart
Is the way I want to share my emotion to you
The way you feel is the way I feel
I lose and gain love is when you gain and lose
The distance you give, I will never forget

The day you tell me I should forget you
Is the day I will tear apart
The day you walk away I never forget
The chance I tell you that I love you
Is still inside me, in my soul

Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …

Nice poem!

umm... Very good I like it

keep it up!

"Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …"


my favourit part :D
thanks to share us ur poem


cheeeeeeeeeers

You took it somewhere or you made it yourself?

denvinbo wrote:You took it somewhere or you made it yourself?

Why is your mind tainted with that? Don't mind so much of what's going on around, purify your mind please...

Hi,
"Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …"
I think these lines are fantastic

oh,so lovely words I liked them so much
thankssssssssssssssssssss