Birthday Present

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Birthday Present

Postby Admiral » Sun Sep 25, 2005 11:28 am

"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"

wishes

Hope you receiving this letter
and these words, containing no beauty, but their inside
are full of truths today
true words you might receive

Today belongs to you, and only you
and I, I won't sit beside you, but the air
is full of wishes today
like the heart is for you

Wish you happy birthday
and words, words you won't hear, but the mind
is full of wishes today
maybe you will receive

Wish you a happy time
and destiny, destiny which we can't change, but the promise
is full of truths today
true feelings for you

Wish you a warm heart
and love, love you might doubt, but this heart
is full of truths today
like my heart is for you

Hope you being glad because of this little present
and these wishes, wishes which are true, and these words
are full of love today
like the heart is for you

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Re: Birthday Present

Postby northernwolf » Wed Oct 05, 2005 12:20 pm

Admiral wrote:wishes

Hope you receiving this letter
and these words, containing no beauty, but their inside
are full of truths today
true words you might receive

Today belongs to you, and only you
and I, I won't sit beside you, but the air
is full of wishes today
like the heart is for you

Wish you happy birthday
and words, words you won't hear, but the mind
is full of wishes today
maybe you will receive

Wish you a happy time
and destiny, destiny which we can't change, but the promise
is full of truths today
true feelings for you

Wish you a warm heart
and love, love you might doubt, but this heart
is full of truths today
like my heart is for you

Hope you being glad because of this little present
and these wishes, wishes which are true, and these words
are full of love today
like the heart is for you

the poem is very warm, I think i will use it when my friends brithday comes^^

Admiral

Postby Admiral » Tue Oct 11, 2005 12:40 pm

I felt this many months ago
under sunshine, your face stuck at the bottom of my heart
I only knew, when that summer sang inside me
a little while, and in me sings no more

The feelings, expected once to stay
has left a note saying: gone away
Your words those were saintly then
now cold down like a silent ban

What I condemned I would never be
now sticks to my life wherever I flee
but why shall I fear to tell you now
I have found my one, you were not?

And now she stands there in front of me
after these days of confusion had left it’s sign
now I can not say what loves have come and gone, but I
bet, that reason leads my way

Admiral

Postby Admiral » Thu Oct 13, 2005 10:50 am

This summer I told her, I will still be there,
for her love left no reply.
Six moths later, she changed her mind,
for her heart did not deny.

Despite all the hopes I have to say,
I'll be a nothing opposed to her.
And nothing I can do as to lay,
against a wall for waiting after.

Admiral

Postby Admiral » Fri Oct 14, 2005 6:33 pm

Sitting on an edge of a river, watching a sun goes down
The unchained melody of your words, still in my ear
Water splashing on my feet, the words I still want to hear
The silent emptiness of nature, still makes me drown

The misty fog between us, became more than clear
But still, my hand is not able to reach an aim
Perhaps it would vanish at that day, but this poem?
Where will your heart stay, where my fear?

The infinite miles between us, how many will be?
But despite, the eyes are not able to see you
Perhaps they will vanish at that day, but you, too?
Where will your heart be, and my anxiety?

Oh girl, might you stay beside me? Together, forever?

Please look around you, what will you see?
Would you see a bit of my shape, only a little clue
Or will your eyes be fixed at another dude?
Another guy, strong, kind, nice, better, but not me

Don’t get the answers, wished to know now
Despite, I hope you can feel the same, deep inside
How much you mean for me, the single light
Around which my whole life now has been about

Glancing up at the moon, and the soul longs to die
The mystic shape of your ghost, still deep inside the mind
Owls howling at heart, the tears I still want to find
The silent emptiness of nature, still makes the hearts cry

Admiral

Postby Admiral » Fri Oct 14, 2005 7:07 pm

This spring she told me, age doesn't matter,
for our friendship to endure.
Six months later, I just want to remember,
for the meaning of the answer.

She is the one I've searched for my life,
and whatever happens, I’ve no fear.
And in whichever lake she will dive,
she should know, my heart is here.

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Postby Ms.A.Z » Thu Dec 22, 2005 7:53 am

beautiful poem,If you don't mind i will used it for one of my friends in their b'day.Well done! :)

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Postby amanita » Sun Jan 15, 2006 7:37 am

it is very beautiful.
when i read your poem i remembered the time that i had a friend just like your friend!
i love him more that person that i saw till that time.
and now it is about 6 month that i havent any news about him and can`t see him.
i know how your feeling is.
but we must be strong.
life is going and every things just as they were.
just the feeling of us change.
I love Badminton very much!

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dear

Postby tikay » Wed Feb 15, 2006 9:22 pm

dear Admiral...please begin to give a name to your poems and sonnets...I think we will be able to say better the ones we love or like the most and so on, I love the one above, that begins with sitting by the river, I especially like the last verse in that one -there is something haunting about that verse. I know the meaning you are conveying. It is very good.
Your friend forever! :wink: Tikay!

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Postby Admiral » Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:20 am

Plushhearts say that I love you, but not from my heart.
Poems say that I love you, but with rhymed words.
Roses say that I love you, but roses fade.
Jewelries are only metals, romantic novels the luck of others.
So I give you my heart, all I know about love,
and what you are to me

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Postby InLove » Wed Jan 17, 2007 9:01 am

Very sensational!

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Postby Vega » Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:35 pm

Nice poem. Congratulations! :)

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Postby Oriani » Wed Jan 17, 2007 7:00 pm

Admiral wrote:Plushhearts say that I love you, but not from my heart.
Poems say that I love you, but with rhymed words.
Roses say that I love you, but roses fade.
Jewelries are only metals, romantic novels the luck of others.
So I give you my heart, all I know about love,
and what you are to me


I wish somebody dedicated a poem like that for me! :oops:

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Postby Admiral » Thu Jan 18, 2007 9:22 pm

thank you so much Inlove, Xkalibur, and Oriani! O&O :lol:

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hello sweetheart

Postby tikay » Fri Dec 07, 2007 4:03 am

I know that you gave her everything....

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Re: Birthday Present

Postby denvinbo » Tue Dec 18, 2007 10:55 am

So simple, I want an...expensive notebook in my birthday.(I that so greedy)
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