Birthday Present

Add your poems, essays and short stories here. Please do not post work by other writers.

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Postby InLove » Wed Jan 17, 2007 9:01 am

Very sensational!

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Postby Vega » Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:35 pm

Nice poem. Congratulations! :)

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Postby Oriani » Wed Jan 17, 2007 7:00 pm

Admiral wrote:Plushhearts say that I love you, but not from my heart.
Poems say that I love you, but with rhymed words.
Roses say that I love you, but roses fade.
Jewelries are only metals, romantic novels the luck of others.
So I give you my heart, all I know about love,
and what you are to me


I wish somebody dedicated a poem like that for me! :oops:

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Postby Admiral » Thu Jan 18, 2007 9:22 pm

thank you so much Inlove, Xkalibur, and Oriani! O&O :lol:

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hello sweetheart

Postby tikay » Fri Dec 07, 2007 4:03 am

I know that you gave her everything....

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Re: Birthday Present

Postby denvinbo » Tue Dec 18, 2007 10:55 am

So simple, I want an...expensive notebook in my birthday.(I that so greedy)
Hi everybody, I'm a new visitor of this page. I want every people friendly with me :D :) :? :lol:


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