Vase

Add your poems, essays and short stories here. Please do not post work by other writers.

Moderators: Vega, EC

Elba
Gold Member
Posts: 456
Joined: Wed Sep 22, 2004 1:51 am
Status: English Learner
Location: México
Contact:

Postby Elba » Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:57 pm

Great, you began a story, and after that you began another?' or is the same, one story into another. Sorry but I lost.
About what I´ve read, it is in good literary mod. But IMHO I don´t see a conection between first and seceond.

Who Am I to critices you?? the only thing I do is ask your for an explanation.

User avatar
Krisi
Ethereal Member
Posts: 3737
Joined: Fri Jul 20, 2007 9:48 am
Status: English Learner
Location: house

Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 16, 2007 8:46 am

The flow of the story suddenly became so unclear. It just puzzled me! :roll:

User avatar
denvinbo
Rough Diamond Member
Posts: 1843
Joined: Sat Dec 08, 2007 1:46 pm
Status: English Learner
Location: Vietnam
Contact:

Re: Vase

Postby denvinbo » Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:44 am

What will I say :?: :?: :?: :?:
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children

mybikiny
Silver Member
Posts: 58
Joined: Thu Dec 14, 2006 2:07 am

Re: Vase

Postby mybikiny » Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:45 am

Great story, GJ. hoping you make it better. i thought you a writter :D

User avatar
denvinbo
Rough Diamond Member
Posts: 1843
Joined: Sat Dec 08, 2007 1:46 pm
Status: English Learner
Location: Vietnam
Contact:

Re: Vase

Postby denvinbo » Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:45 am

Well, there's nothing to do........ :D :D :D :D
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children

User avatar
shakespear
Platinum Member
Posts: 830
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: English Teacher
Location: IRAQ
Contact:

Re: Vase

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 7:20 am

"Don't think twice before you listen to your heart. I will think thrice!" it`s wrong .I prefer to say "Don`t think before you listen to your heart I`ll follow it directly. The first love is the true love and the first look is the innocent look .
our life is like a night mare


Return to “Creative Writing”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests

cron