Sometimes you wonder.

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Sometimes you wonder.

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Sometimes you wonder :

There is such a warm sun,
In the middle of the blue sky, but
Sometimes you wonder
Why the clouds make it grey.

There are so many trees,
So many flowers, so much ground, but
Sometimes you wonder
Why fire burns all this.

There are so many people,
So many living people, but
Sometimes you wonder
Why some people kill them.

There are so many happy days,
So many people, so many friends, but
Sometimes you wonder
Why love disappears.

There are so many media,
So many ways of communication, but
Sometimes you wonder
Why communication does not work.

There is so much courtesy,
So many polite people, but
Sometimes you really wonder
Why you are not respected.

Sometimes you really wonder !



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Post by Admiral »

wow, from my very very personal point of view, I never thought that you can write such good poems.
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Thank you !
Admiral wrote:I never thought that you can write such good poems.
Either I did. :lol:

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Wow! So great! I really enjoyed it, shokin! :wink:
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One of my idea is to change it to a song. :mrgreen:

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Post by Dixie »

Beautiful, Shokin! ;)
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:D GOOD :lol:
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