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selias
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Posts: 2 Joined: Mon Sep 11, 2006 1:44 pm
Location: Russia
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by selias » Mon Sep 11, 2006 2:39 pm
Listen
i saw no dawn
i saw no dawn
on my way home
feetless
and eyeless
i saw no dawn
that was facing me
And then
i saw no hope
i saw no sense
in the sun's shinin'
i was
going far astray
i was roaming there
and at last i found the Way
(one of my favorites)
Amooon
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Posts: 2 Joined: Mon Sep 11, 2006 4:19 pm
Location: Saudi Arabia
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by Amooon » Mon Sep 11, 2006 4:30 pm
selias
how are you?
indeed it is a little poem
but very nice actually it has a dramatic change at the last of the poem
thank you very much
selias
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Posts: 2 Joined: Mon Sep 11, 2006 1:44 pm
Location: Russia
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by selias » Tue Sep 12, 2006 5:40 am
Thank you for answering Amooon! Actually i guessed this poem would be of no interest to anybody. Wonder you've found it has something there. This poem reflects my aspiration for Truth, sense of life.