little poem

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selias
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little poem

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Listen
i saw no dawn
i saw no dawn
on my way home
feetless
and eyeless
i saw no dawn
that was facing me

And then
i saw no hope
i saw no sense
in the sun's shinin'
i was
going far astray
i was roaming there
and at last i found the Way

(one of my favorites)
Amooon
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Post by Amooon »

selias
how are you?
indeed it is a little poem
but very nice actually it has a dramatic change at the last of the poem
thank you very much
selias
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answerin'

Post by selias »

Thank you for answering Amooon! Actually i guessed this poem would be of no interest to anybody. Wonder you've found it has something there. This poem reflects my aspiration for Truth, sense of life.
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