Like an ocean
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Like an ocean
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Like an ocean
Meaning of this life,
like the chasm of the ocean,
Living in this world,
is a system with emotions,
Power of this life,
in the love that like an ocean,
Freedom in my eyes,
not a fish that in the ocean,
Freedom is a large, larger than the ocean,
Dream in this life,
is just an aim for existence,
Wars in this world,
just a foolish mind resistance,
Reason for these words,
in the depth,...
like in ocean.
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30/10/2006
xk.
Like an ocean
Meaning of this life,
like the chasm of the ocean,
Living in this world,
is a system with emotions,
Power of this life,
in the love that like an ocean,
Freedom in my eyes,
not a fish that in the ocean,
Freedom is a large, larger than the ocean,
Dream in this life,
is just an aim for existence,
Wars in this world,
just a foolish mind resistance,
Reason for these words,
in the depth,...
like in ocean.
_
30/10/2006
xk.
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Re: Like an ocean
You love write poems, not?
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PAARSE wrote:I don't know how old you are.
But I guess It's too soon for you to have a full cup.
This is your problem , isn't it ?
A person tries to be separate from
questions: why life is exist, instead of to be absent? what is the essence of life? What is the true life?
It doesn't mean that a person does not guess it.
On the contrary, guesses, but tries to not think...
(*Martin Heidegger)
if there is something wrong in my poems, just say it...no need in walking about.
Me, my lifestyle, my thoughts and my poems- my philosophy.
(I'm 20)
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I'm not a philosopher, but a usual man with limited mind in this world. Meanwhile I try to think about many questions, such as you wrote.
But, Guess is the onset of Think.
When you guess, you are preparing to think.
Then, perhaps you could detect the truth.
That sentence I said before ( While your cup ...) means that If you are able to help the others or you have ability to serve, you'd be better to do it.
This is a human property.
But, Guess is the onset of Think.
When you guess, you are preparing to think.
Then, perhaps you could detect the truth.
That sentence I said before ( While your cup ...) means that If you are able to help the others or you have ability to serve, you'd be better to do it.
This is a human property.
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PAARSE wrote:I'm not a philosopher, but a usual man with limited mind in this world. Meanwhile I try to think about many questions, such as you wrote.
But, Guess is the onset of Think.
When you guess, you are preparing to think.
Then, perhaps you could detect the truth.
That sentence I said before ( While your cup ...) means that If you are able to help the others or you have ability to serve, you'd be better to do it.
This is a human property.
I'm sorry,I'm not good in english,therefore
I got your cup wrong.
And shokin your poem reminds me of a poem I adapted and rewrote from Franz Kafka:
I needs you, who seems to me like a sorrow, which hurts me very much, like the death of one, whom I preferred more than me, like if I'm thrown out into the woods, away from all human, you must be the axe for the frozen sea inside me.
I needs you, who seems to me like a sorrow, which hurts me very much, like the death of one, whom I preferred more than me, like if I'm thrown out into the woods, away from all human, you must be the axe for the frozen sea inside me.
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