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Christmas Gift

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On Christmas Eve, people were busy with decorating their houses. Justin sent a gift to Linda as before. Linda gazed at this gift –a beautiful bag with smooth surface, different colors of strings and round decorations on it. Linda asked Justin “Did you make one for yourself?” “Sure! I’ll make one for myself this year!” “How could you make so many pretty stuffs for me every year by yourself?” Linda asked. “I’ll show you!” Justin guided Linda to the basement. As Linda walked downstairs, she screamed. She saw many young girls’ dead body hanging everywhere. Some didn’t have eye, some had no hair and even the skin. She suddenly understood the components of the bag. Linda wanted to run away, but the door was locked. Justin walked toward Linda, holding her hand and said “I’m afraid that you’ll die some day and left me alone. If I make a bag by you then I can take it everywhere forever! Ha!”
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uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
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Admiral wrote:uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19 :wink: :roll:
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fortminor wrote:
Admiral wrote:uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19 :wink: :roll:
yes, read and be careful about your boyfriends.. :)
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feanor wrote:
fortminor wrote:
Admiral wrote:uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19 :wink: :roll:
yes, read and be careful about your boyfriends.. :)
good advice! :P
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Post by fortminor »

ohhhhh :o
so scary...yes,I should be careful.
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Great story

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I think it's a great story and fabulously. I admire your imaginary a lot.
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forough wrote:ohhhhh
so scary...yes,I should be careful.
If God would give us an opening, I will protect you
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If God would give us an opening, I will protect you
WOW!!..It sounds so good. 8)

Hmm..this story looks like a horror movie.If it is movie It would be funny and exciting. :roll:
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Admiral wrote:uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
ha!I scared myself while writing!
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fortminor wrote:
Admiral wrote:uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19 :wink: :roll:
I am 18......
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feanor wrote:
fortminor wrote:
Admiral wrote:uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19 :wink: :roll:
yes, read and be careful about your boyfriends.. :)
hi!I see you again!
Maybe my boyfriend should be careful!(just kidding)
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Re: Great story

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MandyWang wrote:I think it's a great story and fabulously. I admire your imaginary a lot.
thank you! Mandy! I also surprised that I could write this kind of story!
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but this story is so far from reality.
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very pretty story to be THE NICEST POST OF THE MONTH :lol: :) 8)
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but this story is so far from reality.
Yeah, real men won't do this. And often this is not the real way to show that you love someone else... It should come with passion :lol: , and connection
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and another point is how the girl couldn't find out that the bag is strange (maybe bl00dy :evil: ) :wink:
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maybe the guy had washed it thoroughly
Please read this it is interesting
http://news.nationalgeographic.com/news ... _book.html
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fortminor wrote:but this story is so far from reality.
i am glad it's not the reality!
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Admiral wrote:
but this story is so far from reality.
Yeah, real men won't do this. And often this is not the real way to show that you love someone else... It should come with passion :lol: , and connection
In fact,this story is ironic. Everybody knows that it's the wrong way to show his love. However, many people hurt their lover because they misunderstood the define of love!
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Admiral wrote:maybe the guy had washed it thoroughly
Please read this it is interesting
http://news.nationalgeographic.com/news ... _book.html
scary photo......
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shelly wrote:
fortminor wrote:but this story is so far from reality.
i am glad it's not the reality!
lol :lol:
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