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Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:33 pm
by shokin
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !
(yes, very short
)
Shokin
Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:53 pm
by Hardi
Yes very nice, but u could shorten it even more. Just say "I'm shokin!"
Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 3:13 pm
by babara
Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 3:28 pm
by shokin
Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 9:25 am
by Vega
Re: Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 5:13 pm
by Lara
either you cry or laugh not both
Re: Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:13 am
by shakespear
shokin wrote:Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !
(yes, very short
)
Shokin
my friend shokin i like this short poems and i think i can make it long but its urs and i dont wana trespass ur poems
..... congratulations
go ahead and do like this but try to make it long i think u have the talent
thnx