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shokin
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by shokin »
Am I glad ? Am I sad ?
How could I know ?
The same way I cannot laugh,
The same way I can just cry.
I hear so many nice songs,
From Earth and from Sky.
I forget so many mounts under the moon,
Which are full of sparks in the dark.
Am I glad ? Am I sad ?
How could I know ?
I am losing sight,
Without evening light.
Shokin
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babara
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by babara »
Am I glad ? Am I sad ?
How could I know ?
The same way I cannot laugh,
The same way I can just cry.
I like this. When I try to ask oneself this word It makes feel strange and good together. :D
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Admiral
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by Admiral »
wow good poem I like this style (my style, haha)
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Vega
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by Vega »
I like it. :D
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Dexter
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by Dexter »
nice :D
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Sunnypk
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by Sunnypk »
very nice
good job
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fadi
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by fadi »
nice one shokin.,.,.,really nice
keep goin my friend :D
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shakespear
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by shakespear »
I think that your poem " Am I glad? Am I sad? " is a good poem and I'd like to congratulate you on it .