Her Broken Christmas.

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jmiya
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I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .

A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find

hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring
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jmiya wrote: I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .

A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find

hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring
Uhm not rainy afternoon kinda but whatever :] I like this poem...good job!!!
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letsjam your poem is active and very good and I want to communicate with you continuouosly.thanks.
our life is like a night mare
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:wink:
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"She lost her faith in love.
You stabbed her in the heart." these words are fantastic and I like them.
If you want to be left alone to cry, I`ll cry with you in your loneliness .GOOD LUCK . :cry:
our life is like a night mare
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