Her Broken Christmas.

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Postby letsjam » Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:26 pm

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Postby babara » Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:11 pm

Nice pic but so sad.... :(

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Postby letsjam » Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:44 pm

well it reflects my mood. heh. =/

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Postby letsjam » Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:46 pm

and that girl kinda looks like me =]

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Postby babara » Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:53 pm

letsjam wrote:well it reflects my mood. heh. =/


Why are you sad?
You try to find some friend to talking with you or listen to music but not slow music or sad music or watch a comical movie...I think It may help you from sadness or depression. :)

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Postby Oriani » Sun Jan 21, 2007 9:52 pm

Yeah! I think that picture goes with me..!!! :oops:

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Postby letsjam » Tue Jan 23, 2007 11:50 pm

babara wrote:
letsjam wrote:well it reflects my mood. heh. =/


Why are you sad?


you can find the answer in a new topic that i just posted. Dancing in front of the mirror to music.

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Postby Lac » Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:34 am

It sounds not sad yet meditative. Such pondering moments are sometimes quite precious because it helps us what cheerfulness is. Also, I often seat long for letting my mind wandering around beyond all earthly realities.
To my point, the pic you posted is pretty lovely and looks a bit romantic. But if it was either a real pic boy or girl, it would be far more romantic. Right ?

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Postby Oriani » Thu Feb 01, 2007 8:54 pm

Lac wrote:It sounds not sad yet meditative. Such pondering moments are sometimes quite precious because it helps us what cheerfulness is. Also, I often seat long for letting my mind wandering around beyond all earthly realities.
To my point, the pic you posted is pretty lovely and looks a bit romantic. But if it was either a real pic boy or girl, it would be far more romantic. Right ?


Excellent!!!!!!!!! :wink:

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Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:06 am

Really itis wonderfull and itis magic.

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Postby Vega » Sat Jun 02, 2007 7:43 am

Wow, really nice poem (I've just read it). :)

Congratulations!! :D

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Postby jmiya » Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:48 pm

I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .

A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find

hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring

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Postby letsjam » Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:25 am

jmiya wrote: I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .

A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find

hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring


Uhm not rainy afternoon kinda but whatever :] I like this poem...good job!!!

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Re: Her Broken Christmas.

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 12, 2008 9:43 am

letsjam your poem is active and very good and I want to communicate with you continuouosly.thanks.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Her Broken Christmas.

Postby letsjam » Tue Feb 12, 2008 11:56 am

:wink:

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Re: Her Broken Christmas.

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:20 am

"She lost her faith in love.
You stabbed her in the heart." these words are fantastic and I like them.
If you want to be left alone to cry, I`ll cry with you in your loneliness .GOOD LUCK . :cry:
our life is like a night mare


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