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shokin
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Postby shokin » Fri Aug 10, 2007 8:54 pm

Don't feel culpability. We too have many others things to do. First do things whose you know the sense, the meaning, the goal.

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mybikiny
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The next chapter

Postby mybikiny » Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:31 am

When they awaked. They have only five man. All their friend disappeared. Group of five people. And around them is a black wall. They became panic. They tried to find the way out. But nowhere for them to escape.

" We need destroy this wall ". shouted from the strongest man in the group.
" But how, we don't have any weapon ? " Said another man.
" The god will bless you, man " Replied from strongest man.
" Bless us ? Ha ha ha , we was crime, we killed people, why did the god have to bless us ? " Said one girl in group.
" Why you don't use your strength, man " Said from the girl.
" That's a good ideal, baby, now get out of my way, i will do it " Replied from the strongest man.
He used his punch to push this wall but it didn't have any effect with it.
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