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GOOD BYE
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:37 am
by shakespear
She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:02 pm
by fadi
hi shakespear
really nice poem.,.,i really like it,.,.keep goin my friend
PS>>>>plz write your locaton IRAQ in a capital letters.,.its your country man :D u must be proud of it
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:31 pm
by Vega
Wow!!!! Very romantic words :D :D
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:46 pm
by babara
Very nice!! :P :D
Hi all
Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:31 pm
by shakespear
thanks for all I want to become friend to all
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:22 am
by shakespear
Hi fadi ,where are you ? I really miss you .Could I hear your new news ? Good luck my dearest friend .
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:08 am
by denvinbo
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
Although it's a bit short.....I think it's good...........
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:00 am
by shakespear
my friend denvinbo if I can express my feelings in one words I`ll do.Thanks .
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:23 am
by denvinbo
Go ahead.......... :)
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:39 am
by Krisi
denvinbo wrote:Go ahead.......... :)
hahahaha...
I really thought you would cry.
:P
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:30 am
by denvinbo
I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:21 am
by Krisi
denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
you rascal! :P
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:21 am
by denvinbo
krisi wrote:denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
you rascal!
:P
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:06 pm
by Krisi
denvinbo wrote:krisi wrote:denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
you rascal!
:P
What happen to you? :P
:P You stole my smiley....
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 2:57 am
by denvinbo
krisi wrote:denvinbo wrote:krisi wrote:
you rascal!
:P
What happen to you? :P
:P You stole my smiley....
But you are smiling........
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:42 am
by Raven
what happen to you guys
Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhe
both of you are so funny
and to you shakespeare your poem very romantic
have anice day.....,
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:45 am
by Krisi
krisi wrote:denvinbo wrote:krisi wrote:
you rascal!
:P
What happen to you? :P
:P You stole my smiley....
denvinbo wrote:
But you are smiling........
it's unbelievable! you didn't steal my smiley. Thanks, dear! :P :P :P
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:28 am
by denvinbo
I'm a good people....hehehehe
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:13 pm
by shakespear
Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:46 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley...
be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha
:P:
!!!
Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:38 am
by denvinbo
krisi wrote:shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley...
be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha
:P:
!!!
Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:52 pm
by Krisi
denvinbo wrote:krisi wrote:shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley...
be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha
:P:
!!!
Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............
OK! :P
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 2:40 am
by denvinbo
hahaha.......This global will have a monster....:P
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:26 am
by shakespear
Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:59 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!!
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:23 am
by shakespear
Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:25 pm
by denvinbo
Krisi wrote:shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!!
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:55 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.
OK! I'll follow.
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:57 am
by shakespear
Hi .But I don`t think that.
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 11:49 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Hi .But I don`t think that.
What do you mean? :| Are you doubting?
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:24 am
by shakespear
Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 2:05 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
:)
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:27 am
by shakespear
I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:27 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.
So far I have no intention to compete with you... :P
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:03 am
by shakespear
I think u r really who must cry because y don`t write something creative. goodluck.
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:31 pm
by Hatter
I like short poems.
Better to leave people wishing there was more than otherwise. :D
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 1:09 am
by nemo
hi...i like it...
emmm....can u make a poem about me.....
hehehehe....
:D :D :D
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:15 am
by shakespear
thank u nemo
i can but i need sth about u
good luck
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:17 am
by shakespear
thank u nemo
i can but I need to know sth about u
goos luck
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 4:00 pm
by loola
woow my friend . i like it so much..it's very romantic words..
thanks for ur lines...
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 7:48 am
by shakespear
Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 2:43 am
by allison
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...
Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:07 am
by CybaSumo
nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing!
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:00 pm
by shakespear
Hi allison
ur poem`s fantastic.Congratulations
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:53 am
by shakespear
hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:21 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:27 pm
by nxswxxg
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:00 am
by shakespear
hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:02 am
by farah
i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead
Re: GOOD BYE
Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:02 pm
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
comment plz
