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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:38 am

krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .


Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...


If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............ :lol:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:52 pm

denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .


Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...


If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............ :lol:

OK! :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Fri Feb 22, 2008 2:40 am

hahaha.......This global will have a monster....:P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:26 am

Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:59 am

shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .


Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!! :mrgreen:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:23 am

Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:25 pm

Krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .


Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!! :mrgreen:


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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:55 am

shakespear wrote:Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.


OK! I'll follow. :mrgreen:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:57 am

Hi .But I don`t think that.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Wed Mar 12, 2008 11:49 pm

shakespear wrote:Hi .But I don`t think that.


What do you mean? :| Are you doubting? :roll:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:24 am

Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 14, 2008 2:05 am

shakespear wrote:Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:27 am

I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:27 pm

shakespear wrote:I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.


So far I have no intention to compete with you... :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:03 am

I think u r really who must cry because y don`t write something creative. goodluck.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Hatter » Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:31 pm

I like short poems.
Better to leave people wishing there was more than otherwise. :D

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby nemo » Wed Apr 09, 2008 1:09 am

hi...i like it...
emmm....can u make a poem about me.....
hehehehe....
:D :D :D

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:15 am

thank u nemo
i can but i need sth about u
good luck
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:17 am

thank u nemo
i can but I need to know sth about u
goos luck
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby loola » Thu May 22, 2008 4:00 pm

woow my friend . i like it so much..it's very romantic words..
thanks for ur lines...

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sun May 25, 2008 7:48 am

Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind
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