GOOD BYE

[shakespear]

Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind

[allison]

She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.

[CybaSumo]

nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing!

[shakespear]

Hi allison
ur poem`s fantastic.Congratulations

[shakespear]

hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye

[shakespear]

hi everyone and goodluck

[nxswxxg]

nice words,but i don't understand others said

[shakespear]

hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye

[farah]

i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead

[shakespear]

She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

comment plz

[manar]

so sad but really soooooooo nice,

[shakespear]

hello
thanx my dear friend 4 this lovely comment

[shakespear]

hi

[Lara]

Hi!!! it's so sad, actually i hate good bies that's why i said it, hmm yeah nobody wants to say goodbye to his/her love

[shakespear]

sad style is not our choice...i think so

[shakespear]

i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments

[Krisi]

I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........

Yes, I am a girl/female, I don't know you denvinbo!

[shakespear]

wt's the difference???

[shakespear]

RENEW OLD POEMS

[shakespear]

She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
……

Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.

I think you'er the best in this club...you wrote so lovely words...full of representative words
congratulations