GOOD BYE

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Sun May 25, 2008 7:48 am

Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind

allison · Post by **allison** » Thu May 29, 2008 2:43 am

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.

CybaSumo · Post by **CybaSumo** » Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:07 am

nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing!

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:00 pm

Hi allison
ur poem`s fantastic.Congratulations

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:53 am

hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:21 am

hi everyone and goodluck

nxswxxg · Post by **nxswxxg** » Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:27 pm

nice words,but i don't understand others said

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:00 am

hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye

farah · Post by **farah** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:02 am

i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:02 pm

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

comment plz

manar · Post by **manar** » Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:38 am

so sad but really soooooooo nice,

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:50 pm

hello
thanx my dear friend 4 this lovely comment

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:25 am

Lara · Post by **Lara** » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:06 am

Hi!!! it's so sad, actually i hate good bies that's why i said it, hmm yeah nobody wants to say goodbye to his/her love

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:43 am

sad style is not our choice...i think so

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:05 am

i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments

Krisi · Post by **Krisi** » Tue Jun 23, 2015 2:30 pm

denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........

Yes, I am a girl/female, I don't know you denvinbo!

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Tue Jan 05, 2016 11:25 am

wt's the difference???

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:00 am

RENEW OLD POEMS

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:08 am

allison wrote:
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
……
Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.

I think you'er the best in this club...you wrote so lovely words...full of representative words
congratulations

ESL Forums

GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE

Re: GOOD BYE