ENDLESS DAY

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ENDLESS DAY

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Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
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A very good poem, :D Bravo Shakespeare !
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Hmm..agree...NICE!!
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It is normal, it is Shakespear !

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shokin wrote:It is normal, it is Shakespear !

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Hmm..You are right!! :D :lol:
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nice poem
It's too good
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THANKS ALOT ALL OF YOU . SHOKIN ! DONT YOU THINK ONE IS IN NEED TO ENCOURAGEMENT . THANK YOU AGAIN
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Yes, we all need encouragements ! even Shakespear and shokin !

We are waiting for your next poems, hanging tongue.

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shokin my friend I miss you.It `s a long time .I want to hear about you .Good luck .
our life is like a night mare
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A sad poem......
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We must write everything inside our heart .Good luck .
our life is like a night mare
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Hi . It`s not very bad .
our life is like a night mare
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Hi . It`s not very sad , don`t you think ?
our life is like a night mare
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Hi . sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .Good luck.
our life is like a night mare
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you have something special something different iam wonder your words are very special
i hope you a great future :wink:
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Thank u EliasJ
u r very kind
regards
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hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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Hi .
sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .
Good luck.
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hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
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i think u r good poet.............
we have to live our life freely
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It's a nice poem with a rich meaning.
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Cool... very cool.
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hi every one
thanks 4 this comment
and i hope the best times 4 u
i hope we can meet continuously
our life is like a night mare
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shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
comment plz
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shakespear wrote:My winter always needs your spring
when we are in loved we feel we depend on the other person, everthing is around her/him, nice poem Shakespear :)
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thnx friend and hope hear sth new from u ....u have to try new poem....
have good luck
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a very nice poem. Thanks for tirelessly sharing with us your writings.

I still think love is true but, I think I am not just lucky when it comes to love. I guess the definition of true love changes if you will feel hatred and heartaches always.
As of now, I am thinking how life would be without love, care and compassion for one another. Will we still walk with emotion? Will we still see appreciation on one's face? Will we still see the values or meaning of what we do and say? I do hope there still will remain good values for mankind... an endless day indeed.
Good luck to you.
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Yeah, actually i have a new one, i will show u soon, it needs to completed first :D
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krisi my friend
really ur comment is very strong and holds rich meanings among its words and i do hope u always send comments on our poems to enrich us in addition toour poems....i think u'll add a value to our writings...
thnx 4 this lovely comment
best wishes
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hi
i hope u r so happy
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shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless

short poem
and old
our life is like a night mare
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