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ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:26 am
by shakespear
Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:36 am
by Vega
A very good poem, :D Bravo Shakespeare !
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 2:37 pm
by babara
Hmm..agree...NICE!!
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 10:21 pm
by shokin
It is normal, it is Shakespear !
Shokin
Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 8:52 am
by babara
shokin wrote:It is normal, it is Shakespear !
Shokin
Hmm..You are right!! :D
Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:55 pm
by Sunnypk
nice poem
It's too good
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 7:58 am
by shakespear
THANKS ALOT ALL OF YOU . SHOKIN ! DONT YOU THINK ONE IS IN NEED TO ENCOURAGEMENT . THANK YOU AGAIN
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 3:27 pm
by shokin
Yes, we all need encouragements ! even Shakespear and shokin !
We are waiting for your next poems, hanging tongue.
Shokin
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:08 am
by shakespear
shokin my friend I miss you.It `s a long time .I want to hear about you .Good luck .
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:10 am
by denvinbo
A sad poem......
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:28 am
by shakespear
We must write everything inside our heart .Good luck .
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:32 am
by shakespear
Hi . It`s not very bad .
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:35 am
by shakespear
Hi . It`s not very sad , don`t you think ?
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:19 am
by shakespear
Hi . sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .Good luck.
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:59 pm
by EliasJ
you have something special something different iam wonder your words are very special
i hope you a great future
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:08 am
by shakespear
Thank u EliasJ
u r very kind
regards
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:26 am
by shakespear
hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:32 pm
by shakespear
Hi .
sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .
Good luck.
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:12 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:52 am
by farah
i think u r good poet.............
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 3:48 pm
by asdfghjkl
It's a nice poem with a rich meaning.
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 7:31 pm
by (((Edu)))
Cool... very cool.
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:40 pm
by shakespear
hi every one
thanks 4 this comment
and i hope the best times 4 u
i hope we can meet continuously
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:51 pm
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
comment plz
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:51 pm
by Lara
shakespear wrote:My winter always needs your spring
when we are in loved we feel we depend on the other person, everthing is around her/him, nice poem Shakespear :)
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:41 am
by shakespear
thnx friend and hope hear sth new from u ....u have to try new poem....
have good luck
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:40 am
by Krisi
a very nice poem. Thanks for tirelessly sharing with us your writings.
I still think love is true but, I think I am not just lucky when it comes to love. I guess the definition of true love changes if you will feel hatred and heartaches always.
As of now, I am thinking how life would be without love, care and compassion for one another. Will we still walk with emotion? Will we still see appreciation on one's face? Will we still see the values or meaning of what we do and say? I do hope there still will remain good values for mankind... an endless day indeed.
Good luck to you.
-krisi-
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:56 pm
by Lara
Yeah, actually i have a new one, i will show u soon, it needs to completed first :D
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:00 am
by shakespear
krisi my friend
really ur comment is very strong and holds rich meanings among its words and i do hope u always send comments on our poems to enrich us in addition toour poems....i think u'll add a value to our writings...
thnx 4 this lovely comment
best wishes
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:57 am
by shakespear
hi
i hope u r so happy
Re: ENDLESS DAY
Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:17 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
short poem
and old
