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LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 7:32 pm
by shakespear
Don't leave me Oh dear, catch me more tightly
I feel I shall melt, I lose my force
My heart's very weak, it beats slightly
Nothing can take you; I'm with you in any course
Fly highly don't fear... like birds in the sky
Wherever you want to go, my will to go with you
Let's live a sweet life, together we must try
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too
Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 3:46 am
by Sunnypk
Nice poem It's really terrific
Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 7:29 am
by babara
Sweet poem... :)
Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:22 pm
by Vega
Nice poem shakespare, indeed.
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too
Yeah, Bravo shakespare!
Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 4:54 am
by shakespear
Thanks
Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 5:37 am
by Dexter
nice poem, shakespear... very good :D
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:15 am
by shakespear
babara "I want to hear about you,and we all miss you.We like your comments and explanation .Please contact with us and good luck .
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:09 am
by denvinbo
This poem's mean is normal but deep........
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:55 am
by shakespear
babara I`ll contact with you. thanks for your missing me .
denvinbo thanks for your interesting .
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:05 am
by shakespear
Thanks to everyone who misses me and I hope meet you in good times .GOOD LUCK .
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:50 pm
by LegodeFein
Oh,it's so touching!Well done,Shakespear!!!*THUMBS UP*
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:28 am
by shakespear
Hi everyone . please don`t cut your comment. Good luck.
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:32 am
by shakespear
Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 11:53 am
by loola
woow shakespear.. you are a real poet ..
you have a nice world .. i like it so much ..
thank u dear
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 8:01 am
by shakespear
thanks dear
I want to hear about u.
ur comment is important for me
bye
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 5:23 pm
by AlexVlasoff
It's written like a punk-rock song in russia
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Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 7:19 am
by shakespear
Hi AlexVlasoff
thanks for ur comment
could u make a melody fo it?? Just a try.
Good luck
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:01 pm
by shakespear
hi
We like your comments and explanations .Please contact with us and good luck .
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:20 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:18 am
by farah
hi
holla
its gd poem
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:13 am
by Lara
i hadnt seen this poem till now, it's nice
Well, Shakes i think if anyone loves he/she wouldnt leave his/her beloved, or maybe she had her reasons for doing that, Love always hurts...have u listened to this song "Love Hurts" from Nazareth, i advice u to hear it, c u 
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:38 am
by shakespear
Lara wrote:Love always hurts
i think in the beginning love is so sweet but after that its so hard and hurts the lovers
my point of view
Re: LIVING TOGETHER
Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:03 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:Don't leave me Oh dear, catch me more tightly
I feel I shall melt, I lose my force
My heart's very weak, it beats slightly
Nothing can take you; I'm with you in any course
Fly highly don't fear... like birds in the sky
Wherever you want to go, my will to go with you
Let's live a sweet life, together we must try
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too
some of my poems are short
maybe i have to copmlete