LIVING TOGETHER

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby LegodeFein » Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:50 pm

Oh,it's so touching!Well done,Shakespear!!!*THUMBS UP*

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:28 am

Hi everyone . please don`t cut your comment. Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:32 am

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby loola » Sun May 18, 2008 11:53 am

woow shakespear.. you are a real poet ..
you have a nice world .. i like it so much ..

thank u dear

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Mon May 19, 2008 8:01 am

thanks dear
I want to hear about u.
ur comment is important for me
bye
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby AlexVlasoff » Tue May 20, 2008 5:23 pm

It's written like a punk-rock song in russia {-: .
I am not in my way, it's only reflection.
My innocent soul has not ressurection.

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Thu May 22, 2008 7:19 am

Hi AlexVlasoff
thanks for ur comment
could u make a melody fo it?? Just a try.
Good luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:01 pm

hi
We like your comments and explanations .Please contact with us and good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:20 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:18 am

hi
holla
its gd poem
we have to live our life freely

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby Lara » Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:13 am

:!!: i hadnt seen this poem till now, it's nice
Well, Shakes i think if anyone loves he/she wouldnt leave his/her beloved, or maybe she had her reasons for doing that, Love always hurts...have u listened to this song "Love Hurts" from Nazareth, i advice u to hear it, c u :-D

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:38 am

Lara wrote:Love always hurts


i think in the beginning love is so sweet but after that its so hard and hurts the lovers
my point of view


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