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LIVING TOGETHER

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby Lara » Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:13 am

:!!: i hadnt seen this poem till now, it's nice
Well, Shakes i think if anyone loves he/she wouldnt leave his/her beloved, or maybe she had her reasons for doing that, Love always hurts...have u listened to this song "Love Hurts" from Nazareth, i advice u to hear it, c u :-D

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:38 am

Lara wrote:Love always hurts


i think in the beginning love is so sweet but after that its so hard and hurts the lovers
my point of view

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:03 am

shakespear wrote:Don't leave me Oh dear, catch me more tightly
I feel I shall melt, I lose my force
My heart's very weak, it beats slightly
Nothing can take you; I'm with you in any course
Fly highly don't fear... like birds in the sky
Wherever you want to go, my will to go with you
Let's live a sweet life, together we must try
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too


some of my poems are short
maybe i have to copmlete
our life is like a night mare


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