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Postby maksoora » Sun Aug 12, 2007 9:05 pm

You convert the one into lover then slave then lunatic

yeah, nice poem

thank u

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Postby denvinbo » Wed Dec 26, 2007 5:03 am

not too bad, but is it your poem or you write it down from a book or from anybody else :?: :?: :?: :?: :?:

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Postby Oriani » Wed Dec 26, 2007 3:43 pm

What made you feel inspired?

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Postby Bambang » Fri Dec 28, 2007 3:34 am

A good one, Rasheed.
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Postby denvinbo » Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:53 am

uhm! I think it's good.too. You're a very good person, like what bambang have said. :D :D :D :D :D
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Postby denvinbo » Tue Jan 08, 2008 11:16 am

There's no need to thank, 'cause it's truth.......... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:03 am

maksoora"You convert the one into lover then slave then lunatic "Not if you participate love with him .Thank and good luck.
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