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Arale
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Feeling

One day you might remember
One day you might forget
One day you might cry
One day you might laugh

One day you might win
One day you might surrender
One day you might be brave
One day you might be coward

One day you might love
One day you might hate
One day you might revenge
One day you might forgive

One day you might be wise
One day you might be dull
One day you might be strong
One day you might be weak

One day you might be full
One day you might be empty
One day you might be imprisoned
One day you might be free

One day you might feel young
One day you might feel old
One day you might feel fast
One day you might feel slow


And...

One day you will die

So...

Let you touch all of the feelings

But...

Let your tears wipe off sorrow
Let your laughters fill emptiness
Let your tolerance softens hatred
Let the joys lead up your life
Let you share
Let you give
Let you get whatever you want
Let you see
Let you listen
Let you walk to wherever you wish
Let you smile
Let you fly
Let you fulfill your days without any regret


Because...


One day you will die...

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Post by Vega »

Very thoughtful poem, I like your stile...
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Post by babara »

Oh..I like it!! :D :D
It's true one day I will die therefore I will have to let it as your poem. :P
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Post by Arale »

Xkalibur, yep, my style is a bit strange, is it?
babara, I'm trying to let me as that, too!

Thank you both very much! :D

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Post by Sunnypk »

really funtastic but it's truth that our life is combination of sarrows or joys. I wish that we spend our life in peaceful way
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Post by Dexter »

nice poem, Arale :D
it's really true
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Good poem!I like it!
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Thank you all! :wink:
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Arale wrote:Xkalibur, yep, my style is a bit strange, is it?
babara, I'm trying to let me as that, too!

Thank you both very much! :D

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I wouldn't say that, I think it is filled with deep philosophical ideas rather than just strange poem. Nice poem! :)
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Post by ginny »

Oh, this is a nice poem! Thanks.
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