Don't Ask Me!

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Postby MONEM » Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:35 am

If you are her don't ask me any thing :wink:

:) Happy to see you (((Edu)))
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)

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Postby melip » Wed Jun 06, 2007 1:34 am

wow!it's a really nice poem!!!

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Postby MONEM » Wed Jun 06, 2007 9:48 am

:) Thanks melip
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!

great minds have purposes other have wishes.

With all love

MONEM:)

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Postby maksoora » Wed Aug 08, 2007 12:19 am

really meaning ful words
when, i read it i gose deep down sea
i like thankx MONEM

am waiting for new from u

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Re: Don't Ask Me!

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 10, 2008 9:04 am

i feel that this poem is wonderful and you worth excellence
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Don't Ask Me!

Postby MONEM » Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:46 am

Thanks maksoora and shakespear :D
Wait for my next poem and articles, really I'm so happy that you like it :D
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!

great minds have purposes other have wishes.

With all love

MONEM:)

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Re: Don't Ask Me!

Postby Krisi » Sun Mar 23, 2008 12:07 pm

MONEM wrote:Don't Ask me!


Don't ask me how much I love you because I can't


count our love. I can't say a number but I can say I

love you more than the number of human more than the number of angles and more than the entities in this
life.

Don't ask why I love you? Because I asked my heart

million times but there is no answer. I think God

created me to pray for him and to live for you.

Don't ask me when I love you ?because I don't know

when exactly. Actually when I born I fell that I

love someone that I don't know !

Years after years I became bigger.. Every day I used

to look at the sky looking for you .. I knew that

you are real .. one day I found you..

You think that I love you for 5 years only . You

don't know that I loved for 22 years .I'm in love

with you since 1985.

You full the gap in my life .

You was with me when I cry .

You was appearing in the sky .

You was flaying and make me fly.

Your smile gave me hope..

Your happiness gave me life.

Your care gave me love.

Please don't ask me why , when and where I love you ..
If you look to my eyes you will know how much.
If you touch my heart you will know when and where.

Monem


This is GREAT!

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Re: Don't Ask Me!

Postby shakespear » Sun Mar 23, 2008 12:39 pm

Hi Monem . In ur poem , there`s sth deep and I hope u become famouse in the future so good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Don't Ask Me!

Postby sweets » Sun Mar 23, 2008 1:19 pm

it seem ur in love snice ur birth :D

go and tell her what ur waiting for :wink: :wink:


You think that I love you for 5 years only . You

don't know that I loved for 22 years .I'm in love

with you since 1985.

You full the gap in my life .

You was with me when I cry .

You was appearing in the sky .

You was flaying and make me fly.

Your smile gave me hope..

Your happiness gave me life.

Your care gave me love.


i like the most :mrgreen:

keep on this spirit

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار

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Re: Don't Ask Me!

Postby MONEM » Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:46 am

Thanks Krisi, I'm glad that you like its great to see you :D .
Hiiii shakespear , thank you very much for the compliment I wish to be famous in the future ,actually members words and opinions gave me a reason to continue and keep writing :D

Sweets, I’m glad that you liked what I wrote , you are sweet like your name
:wink:

Thanks for u all
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!

great minds have purposes other have wishes.

With all love

MONEM:)


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