In The Dark

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In The Dark

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In The Dark
Darkness** Silent**Lonely ** that was my life in 3 simple words before you came and light my life..
I was a blind man walking in the dark I was afraid from every thing around me .. I was looking for your touch to lead me to happiness and make me see.
One day I found you and I remember that you hold my hand and you said I'll never let you go. Then you kissed my eyes .. For the first time in my life I can see yes .. I can see my dream girl.. She was so beautiful in reality like she was in imagination.
No Darkness any more with her love I found my life.
With her touch I found my way ..
With her kiss I can see every thing .. I can see her.. she is every thing.
In the dark she lights my life and make me see.
Written By Monem :)
March 3 2007
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hmm wow too interesting story
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nice, MONEM :)
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Sunnypk ,Dexter
Thanks , I'm glad that you like it:)
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
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Thanks mrLenin :oops: you are so sweet
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
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Post by babara »

Nice, Monem :)

You are really a romantic boy!! :D
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Post by MONEM »

Hi Barbra ,nice to see you again ..
Thanks for your words really it made me happy :)
And Yes I'm a romantic boy :oops:
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Re: In The Dark

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MONEM wrote:In The Dark
"... Then you kissed my eyes ..."
Very, Very interesting, man! 8)
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You are lucky, you met the girl of your dreas :D :D :D
it is a good story.
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Post by MONEM »

Hi Edu, Thanks for your nice words :oops:

Imad ,I'm so happy that you like it :D Thanks
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What happen if one day she went away?

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What happen if one day she went away?

I am sure that many stories like yours above. That's very nice at first but ... darkness comes back at the end. So, take care & always be ready to face with everything :P

Good luck
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Thanks tungvn :)
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
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Post by Khokha »

Amazing,,,,,is it your story MONEM?
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such a great story.
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haha

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sweet love ,good luck to you !
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Post by MONEM »

Khokha, Its is a story for all lovers :D


Thanks Dhvanesh


THANKS intboy
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There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
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