A poem about grammar.

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Postby Khokha » Mon May 28, 2007 2:10 pm

Oh Bassam :oops:
Thank you so much…
By the way.. congratulation active guy.. you became a silver member :P
Are you happy :?:

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Postby Bassam » Fri Jun 01, 2007 10:11 am

Khokha wrote:Oh Bassam :oops:
Thank you so much…
By the way.. congratulation active guy.. you became a silver member :P
Are you happy :?:

THANK U,, sure I'm so glad ,, 8)
and I'm looking foward for the best,, :oops:

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Postby rivulet » Sat Jun 16, 2007 1:37 pm

Hi all, i am not a Gold member as well as a Silver member. However, i do hope i can join with every members in this website to write, to learn, and to know one another. I love poems very much, but i can write a poem in my native language only. What luck to me to know this great poem by Khokha. Thanks.

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Postby Khokha » Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:12 pm

Welcome rivulet, I think you will be an active member soon. You can write a poem if you have something to write about.
Enjoy your time here and best wishes for you rivulet.

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Postby rivulet » Sun Jun 17, 2007 8:56 am

Many thanks Khokha.
I will try my best to "translate" my poem to English as soon as possible ^^
Then, wait to see if i well done or not ^.*
Have a nice day.

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Postby Khokha » Sun Jun 17, 2007 4:40 pm

You too rivule and waiting for your poem pal :)

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Postby rivulet » Mon Jun 18, 2007 3:26 am

Hic, it seems stupid. However, this is the first time i write my poem ^^. It includes only four sentence:
The moon is hight
The sky is blue
I am here
And, where are you ???

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Postby Khokha » Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:36 pm

Hi rivulet,
What a nice poem! I like it and I think it's a good starting point for your writing dear. It seems like you are talking to your love in the dark night. He is absent and you are missing him. Am I right?

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Postby Bambang » Wed Jul 11, 2007 1:03 pm

You deserve an "A" for that.

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Postby Khokha » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:28 pm

Thankx a lot bambang… :P It seems like you were an "A" student, weren't you?

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Call me uncle.

Postby Bambang » Tue Jul 17, 2007 12:56 pm

Call me uncle my dear.

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Postby maksoora » Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:56 pm

A poem about grammar.

What is lovely poem from lovely person and ur name is so interesting Khokha I like it . I like ur style I felt like soul of child in ur when u said these words .
By the way I read ur comment for mates I like the way u comment
Best wishes to u
Am looking for new from u


maksoor aikatter

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Postby Snowy* » Sun Aug 05, 2007 4:48 pm

Hahahahahahahaha :lol: :D :lol: :D :lol: :D
it's really funny but Ilike it ...
I wish if I can write something beautiful like U>> :D
tell me which university are U study

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Postby Khokha » Fri Sep 14, 2007 8:23 pm

Thank you maksoora,
Your words make me want to fly.. believe me!

Hi Snowy*,
Thank you for your comment.. I'm from UAEU (United Arab Emirates University).
What about you?

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Postby Saku » Tue Sep 18, 2007 4:40 am

I like your poem too. It's stylist! 8)

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Postby yali » Wed Nov 28, 2007 10:34 am

Khokha, not to be put off by someone saying anything negative just cus someone is so discouraging and critical. (Of course they could if they themselves are professional poets/poetesses. But poets/esses don't critize others poems because they all know very well that poems are after all poems). Besides, aren't we composing them only for fun? Keep going Khokha, it's a wonderful and funny poem, or if it's not considered a poem, it's a fantasitic writing. Anyway, I like it. Give yourself 5 gold star stickers(it's the max number) which I often do to my son when he reaches his goal and he sticks them on the calender. Weeeeeell done :!:

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Postby Khokha » Fri Nov 30, 2007 10:34 am

Thank you Saku..
Thank you very much yali.. I like your words :P

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Postby gem » Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:55 am

Khoka you'll go far...a good start for a poet....i like it.....5 star for you!!! :D

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Postby denvinbo » Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:31 am

Hi, I'm a new visitor. Do tell me 'bout this page, Is that OK???? :?: :?: :?: :roll: :shock: 8)

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Postby Bambang » Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:40 am

denvinbo wrote:Hi, I'm a new visitor. Do tell me 'bout this page, Is that OK???? :?: :?: :?: :roll: :shock: 8)


Yes, it is.

Welcome aboard.

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Re: A poem about grammar.

Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:10 am

Khokha wrote:Hi All,
One day in my grammar class, the instructor asked as to write poems about grammar. Actually, it was an assignment and at the same time a competition. I wrote a simple poem and it was like a conversation between me and other classmates. I want to you to share your opinion with me, please!

please! don't Laugh because it was the first time for me to write a poem.

Here ir the poem:


How happy I am!
When I attend the class
And how sad I am!
When I miss my class


Class? Class? Which class you mean?
Don't you know what I mean?
Class of grammar I mean
What can a student call him?
I've never seen like him


Him? Him? Who is him?
Sir, Doctor, you choose anything
Rayn, Robert, he accepts every thing
The lessons of grammar are useful
But we have to be careful


Really? Really? Do you mean that?
Yes, yes it's not easy,
But some chapters are maybe
Please! Don't think we are lazy
Cause we are going to be crazy


Crazy? Crazy? Why crazy?
Sometimes we sleep in the class
To keep attention we need a glass
We enjoy answering the question
But why reasons must be mentioned?


Oh student, how poor you are!
I think "Good Grammar" is a useful book
Answers are written at the end of the book
Look! Look! Please take a look!
To our most amazing book


Is it true that these were the first poems you've done... hmm, I think you've composed a lot before these...
These are all wonderful! :)


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