A poem about grammar.

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Call me uncle my dear.
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A poem about grammar.

What is lovely poem from lovely person and ur name is so interesting Khokha I like it . I like ur style I felt like soul of child in ur when u said these words .
By the way I read ur comment for mates I like the way u comment
Best wishes to u
Am looking for new from u


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Hahahahahahahaha :lol: :D :lol: :D :lol: :D
it's really funny but Ilike it ...
I wish if I can write something beautiful like U>> :D
tell me which university are U study
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Thank you maksoora,
Your words make me want to fly.. believe me!

Hi Snowy*,
Thank you for your comment.. I'm from UAEU (United Arab Emirates University).
What about you?
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I like your poem too. It's stylist! 8)
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Khokha, not to be put off by someone saying anything negative just cus someone is so discouraging and critical. (Of course they could if they themselves are professional poets/poetesses. But poets/esses don't critize others poems because they all know very well that poems are after all poems). Besides, aren't we composing them only for fun? Keep going Khokha, it's a wonderful and funny poem, or if it's not considered a poem, it's a fantasitic writing. Anyway, I like it. Give yourself 5 gold star stickers(it's the max number) which I often do to my son when he reaches his goal and he sticks them on the calender. Weeeeeell done :!:
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Thank you Saku..
Thank you very much yali.. I like your words :P
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Khoka you'll go far...a good start for a poet....i like it.....5 star for you!!! :D
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denvinbo wrote:Hi, I'm a new visitor. Do tell me 'bout this page, Is that OK???? :?: :?: :?: :roll: :shock: 8)
Yes, it is.

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Re: A poem about grammar.

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Khokha wrote:Hi All,
One day in my grammar class, the instructor asked as to write poems about grammar. Actually, it was an assignment and at the same time a competition. I wrote a simple poem and it was like a conversation between me and other classmates. I want to you to share your opinion with me, please!

please! don't Laugh because it was the first time for me to write a poem.

Here ir the poem:


How happy I am!
When I attend the class
And how sad I am!
When I miss my class


Class? Class? Which class you mean?
Don't you know what I mean?
Class of grammar I mean
What can a student call him?
I've never seen like him


Him? Him? Who is him?
Sir, Doctor, you choose anything
Rayn, Robert, he accepts every thing
The lessons of grammar are useful
But we have to be careful


Really? Really? Do you mean that?
Yes, yes it's not easy,
But some chapters are maybe
Please! Don't think we are lazy
Cause we are going to be crazy


Crazy? Crazy? Why crazy?
Sometimes we sleep in the class
To keep attention we need a glass
We enjoy answering the question
But why reasons must be mentioned?


Oh student, how poor you are!
I think "Good Grammar" is a useful book
Answers are written at the end of the book
Look! Look! Please take a look!
To our most amazing book
Is it true that these were the first poems you've done... hmm, I think you've composed a lot before these...
These are all wonderful! :)
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