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Call me uncle.

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 12:56 pm
by Bambang
Call me uncle my dear.

Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:56 pm
by maksoora
A poem about grammar.

What is lovely poem from lovely person and ur name is so interesting Khokha I like it . I like ur style I felt like soul of child in ur when u said these words .
By the way I read ur comment for mates I like the way u comment
Best wishes to u
Am looking for new from u


maksoor aikatter

Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 4:48 pm
by Snowy*
Hahahahahahahaha :lol: :D :lol: :D :lol: :D
it's really funny but Ilike it ...
I wish if I can write something beautiful like U>> :D
tell me which university are U study

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 8:23 pm
by Khokha
Thank you maksoora,
Your words make me want to fly.. believe me!

Hi Snowy*,
Thank you for your comment.. I'm from UAEU (United Arab Emirates University).
What about you?

Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 4:40 am
by Saku
I like your poem too. It's stylist! 8)

Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 10:34 am
by yali
Khokha, not to be put off by someone saying anything negative just cus someone is so discouraging and critical. (Of course they could if they themselves are professional poets/poetesses. But poets/esses don't critize others poems because they all know very well that poems are after all poems). Besides, aren't we composing them only for fun? Keep going Khokha, it's a wonderful and funny poem, or if it's not considered a poem, it's a fantasitic writing. Anyway, I like it. Give yourself 5 gold star stickers(it's the max number) which I often do to my son when he reaches his goal and he sticks them on the calender. Weeeeeell done :!:

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 10:34 am
by Khokha
Thank you Saku..
Thank you very much yali.. I like your words :P

Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:55 am
by gem
Khoka you'll go far...a good start for a poet....i like it.....5 star for you!!! :D

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:31 am
by denvinbo
Hi, I'm a new visitor. Do tell me 'bout this page, Is that OK???? :?: :?: :?: :roll: :shock: 8)

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:40 am
by Bambang
denvinbo wrote:Hi, I'm a new visitor. Do tell me 'bout this page, Is that OK???? :?: :?: :?: :roll: :shock: 8)
Yes, it is.

Welcome aboard.

Re: A poem about grammar.

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:10 am
by Krisi
Khokha wrote:Hi All,
One day in my grammar class, the instructor asked as to write poems about grammar. Actually, it was an assignment and at the same time a competition. I wrote a simple poem and it was like a conversation between me and other classmates. I want to you to share your opinion with me, please!

please! don't Laugh because it was the first time for me to write a poem.

Here ir the poem:


How happy I am!
When I attend the class
And how sad I am!
When I miss my class


Class? Class? Which class you mean?
Don't you know what I mean?
Class of grammar I mean
What can a student call him?
I've never seen like him


Him? Him? Who is him?
Sir, Doctor, you choose anything
Rayn, Robert, he accepts every thing
The lessons of grammar are useful
But we have to be careful


Really? Really? Do you mean that?
Yes, yes it's not easy,
But some chapters are maybe
Please! Don't think we are lazy
Cause we are going to be crazy


Crazy? Crazy? Why crazy?
Sometimes we sleep in the class
To keep attention we need a glass
We enjoy answering the question
But why reasons must be mentioned?


Oh student, how poor you are!
I think "Good Grammar" is a useful book
Answers are written at the end of the book
Look! Look! Please take a look!
To our most amazing book
Is it true that these were the first poems you've done... hmm, I think you've composed a lot before these...
These are all wonderful! :)