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My love

Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 11:48 am
by Vega
*the poem has been deleted for some reasons

Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 1:45 pm
by InLove
of course, she'll love you if you put your heart into hers.

Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 6:19 pm
by babara
So sweet! according to your post the girl is really lucky and she will have to love you if she knows these feeling. :P

Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 4:04 pm
by Vega
Thank you for nice words! .... :)

Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 8:45 pm
by maksoora
I hope she loved u but,
I don't we cant force some one to love some one els it just happen

We cant control of our emotion, if we can we will be the most joy people

Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 11:24 pm
by est
if u try to kill u
she will love u :wink:

Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 4:20 am
by Vega
est wrote:if u try to kill u
she will love u :wink:
Thank you for the advice.

Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 1:22 pm
by Nanning
Personally I think it is a little too farfetched.In China, we say that you can't make two a couple by tying them together.
Why do you waste so much of your life on such a female?
You love a flower, you don't have to pick it,right?

Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:12 pm
by sweets
you seems that u have a big shock in ur love :( how poor ur :(

Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 3:17 pm
by Vega
sweets wrote:you seems that u have a big shock in ur love :( how poor ur :(
Thank you.. :)'s actually wasn't experienced. It's what I would, what I'd feel like...

Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 3:34 pm
by Ms.A.Z
good piece of writting wonderful i liked it... :wink:

Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 10:51 pm
by Krisi
Nanning wrote: You love a flower, you don't have to pick it,right?

Nanning, I'm sorry, I can't clearly get what you mean? Please explain further.

Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 6:04 am
by nemo
well...i like this's great and make me thinking about my love life.....i hv not yet meet a person who can make me fall in love. i hv rejected some because my heart says no. my friends say i'm too choosy. i don't know. i can't force i just leave it......
this poem make me realize that i hv to follow my friends and fall in love with some one....
the problem is...what can i heart still say no.....
waiting....waiting...waiting..and choosing again..that's me....

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Re: My love

Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 3:06 pm
by Krisi
Xkalibur wrote:I'm sitting in a silence and thinking of her,
And I know she can't be mine..
I'd pledge myself, this damn rain and my lonely soul,
but would she love me then...?
Like whiff of wind I'd call her name,
Like longawaited sun I'd shine,
but would she hear me then...?
I know she can't be mine..
her voice, her smile, her charming eyes..
I'd kill myself a thousand times...
but would she love me then...?



7 May 2007
Nice poem, Xkalibur. (So sad...)

Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:52 am
by yali
Hi Xkalibur,

I hope I'm not too late to read your sweet poem. It's so touching and I'm praying for your luck with her . Go ahead to befriend with her, 'hi' is a simpliest word to start. Putting your first step out so that you'd be able to reach the summit. Frankly speaking, we have realize that any friendship (or relationship) is like singing in the choir. A solo opera's never hit a result. When someone sings too slowly or too fast, it's simply because he/she hears a different tempo of the music which never matches the rest. That means he/she doesn't want to be there to sing with you. Then again, you're not alone. There are plenty out there singing together with you. You (all) are tuned but if you force yourself to tune with her, it's a hard way to make it. If I'm not mistaken, you are still quite young. You have many opportunities to meet a lot of people. You'll feel tired at the end of day if you tide yourself up with someone at a too young age. Making friendship is happier and easier than a serious relationship. A bright future is ahead of you, spending too much time on it is just a waste of your youth. Think twice and good luck.

Re: My love

Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 10:43 am
by denvinbo
I have my lover, but she take me away... and she said:'' I'll never like someone, except that you''. :D :) :lol:

Re: My love

Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:07 am
by Ms.A.Z
WOW well written..i wish if some one can write such things for me and mean it :roll:

Re: My love

Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:43 am
by denvinbo
Don't be too serious................ :D :D :D

Re: My love

Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 10:41 am
by fabulous
cool! nice poem. fantastically gorgeous!
i'd hope shw will know your love towards her!

Re: My love

Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 10:00 am
by shakespear
Dear ; if she read this poem and didn`t love you , she might be madness or without a heart .I never heard on a hard hearted like your love . YOU DON`T CRY ALONE. I SHALL CRY WITH YOU.GOOD LUCK.