Probably a Sick Heart.

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Probably a Sick Heart.

Postby Oriani » Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:46 pm

Teach me how can I mend a broken heart
Teach me how to forget all of your promises
Or were all of your pormises false?
Were they not true?

Facts... Words.. Pictures, People say something that you didn't confess
The confession I needed to hear
The truth that I deserved to know.

Is it fair that I have to find out by myself?
Is it not better If you just be honest with me?
Yes.. sometimes we need to know it by ourselves, but how much painful it is.

Oh , God... Oh, world...I know this is a magic life
But how can I make magic mine
If I feel my magic is lost...faith... love.

How can I mend my broken heart?
How long my heart will be sick? Is there any cure?
I just can't see beyond the truth, beyond what my heart says but what it hurts me.

How I can mend a broken heart...

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Postby lluviax » Wed Aug 01, 2007 11:32 pm

Hello Oriani :)
I think that your poem is very beautiful and deep.

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Postby maksoora » Sun Aug 05, 2007 12:20 pm

Hi Oriani


Do u know my neke name (maksoor_alkatter)what mean??

arabic name mean(Broken heart).

i like ur poem coz about broken heart

am waitting for new from u

thank u

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Postby Snowy* » Sun Aug 05, 2007 4:36 pm

hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:

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Postby maksoora » Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:30 pm

Snowy* wrote:hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:


dont worry snowy its just nake.

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Postby Oriani » Sun Aug 05, 2007 9:31 pm

Snowy* wrote:hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:


Someone who doesn't (and didn't) deserve my love... You can find a pic of his in the forum.. I don't remember where I posted it. I think at the Confessions topic.

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Postby Oriani » Sun Aug 05, 2007 9:32 pm

maksoora wrote:Hi Oriani


Do u know my neke name (maksoor_alkatter)what mean??

arabic name mean(Broken heart).

i like ur poem coz about broken heart

am waitting for new from u

thank u


Oh, I didn't know it, in fact, I just know one of two words in Arabic.

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Postby maksoora » Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:40 pm

, I didn't know it, in fact, I just know one of two words in Arabic.[/quote]

if u want i will learn u Arabic ekeke

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Postby babara » Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:21 pm

I remember it and as I told in your space nice poem,dear.. but not a real matter ,right? :)

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Postby Oriani » Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:39 pm

babara wrote:I remember it and as I told in your space nice poem,dear.. but not a real matter ,right? :)


It is, unfortunately :(


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